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[Fudged 2]

I see much improvement

^^Good Points^^
It's amazing how much you've improved graphically since the first episode of this series. I loved how you did the backgrounds and your character drawings were likewise good. The voice overs were very good and were high quality, much better than the first episode. I found this movie quite funny, especially the "GothMo's"...that's classic.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like how this movie didn't follow a real storyline, it jumped from topic to topic and I would have liked to see it focus more on one certain event.

[FUDGED]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
Though the drawings were a little shoddy, I liked em, they were pretty unique. Some of the insults were pretty funny, and the voice you chose to use was very good. The end was pretty funny too, I didn't expect that to happen.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie has a terrible lack of animation, which makes it slightly bland. The voice overs at the end started to get a little low quality and broke up a little bit.

[Hal Goes camping]

Nice drawings

^^Good Points^^
I really like your drawing and shading, it really looks nice. Very professional and leaves a good impression.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the sound effects at all, it just didn't sound right. The storyline was decent, kind of cute but not something I really like that much. You've got great graphical talent, now just work on the storylines more.

[The Jewish Collab]

Another pointless collab

^^Good Points^^
The only good parts of this collab were FLCLMonkey's part, which had good drawings and a good sound clips, and the picture for Squarehead's part.

^^Needs Improving^^
We all knew that Piclownjew's part would be a screamer, it is completely random and adds nothing to the movie. This collab is really stupid and no part really impressed me.

SquaresHard responds:

these collabs has as much of a point to them than all the soundboards that you make, o wait, nvm, they are pointless. here, well start making some soundboards so we can impress you, cuz soundboards take SO much more skill and talent, yep...SOUNDBOARDS!

[Sprite Lock Film]

Great stuff

^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphics in this a lot. They were really unique and quite different from most other LL movies. I especially liked how you moved around the Lock faces, it looked pretty cool. Even though the script was random I thought it was pretty comical, especially at the end.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have loved to just keep watching this and having it go on and on with just more random stuff. So make more or make it longer!

[+Be Yourself+]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
One thing I liked about this movie was the character designs. They looked pretty cute, and were simple yet still didn't look like crap. The animations were pretty good as well, and the music went pretty well with the storyline of the flash, which was also pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could be a little longer seeing how it went way too quickly, and I had to watch it a few times to completely understand what happened.

[-Pickles-]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
I liked your drawings and the animations in this movie, I thought that they made the movie just a little bit more funny. The voice over was very cool as were the rest of the sound effects. This is a nice short movie and it gave me a little laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should have made this movie a lot longer, all that happened was the rocket launcher and him getting knocked out, I was really expecting some more out of this.

[Ron]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty darn funny. I like the way you drew Ron and his voice over was done very well too. The other voice overs were done very well as well, nice job. I found this to be pretty funny, even though I normally don't like really random flash movies.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a preloader and some graphical improvement (except for Ron). Other than that, keep em coming.

Maxwell-FA responds:

thanks for the constructive feedback. i made this animation a few months before i got my wacom tablet, so as you can see the drawings aren't up to par. writing and voice wise i am extremely satisfied with how Ron turned out. i'll have more animations to come.