FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sprite Lock Film]

Great stuff

^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphics in this a lot. They were really unique and quite different from most other LL movies. I especially liked how you moved around the Lock faces, it looked pretty cool. Even though the script was random I thought it was pretty comical, especially at the end.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have loved to just keep watching this and having it go on and on with just more random stuff. So make more or make it longer!

[+Be Yourself+]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
One thing I liked about this movie was the character designs. They looked pretty cute, and were simple yet still didn't look like crap. The animations were pretty good as well, and the music went pretty well with the storyline of the flash, which was also pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could be a little longer seeing how it went way too quickly, and I had to watch it a few times to completely understand what happened.

[-Pickles-]

Not bad.

^^Good Points^^
I liked your drawings and the animations in this movie, I thought that they made the movie just a little bit more funny. The voice over was very cool as were the rest of the sound effects. This is a nice short movie and it gave me a little laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
You should have made this movie a lot longer, all that happened was the rocket launcher and him getting knocked out, I was really expecting some more out of this.

[Ron]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty darn funny. I like the way you drew Ron and his voice over was done very well too. The other voice overs were done very well as well, nice job. I found this to be pretty funny, even though I normally don't like really random flash movies.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a preloader and some graphical improvement (except for Ron). Other than that, keep em coming.

Maxwell-FA responds:

thanks for the constructive feedback. i made this animation a few months before i got my wacom tablet, so as you can see the drawings aren't up to par. writing and voice wise i am extremely satisfied with how Ron turned out. i'll have more animations to come.

[Captain Jack!]

Well, this is retarded.

^^Good Points^^
Well, good for you on being a DDR player and choosing one of the catchiest songs on 8th mix for a flash, but really this is terrible!

^^Needs Improving^^
I think it is save to say that 99.9% of this movie was composed of nothing but random animated GIFs that have nothing to do with Captain Jack, DDR, or are even related! This is really just more annoying than anything and I have no idea how it passed judgement.

heartless-mushroom responds:

You said: " have no idea how it passed judgement"
I answer: some people love the random and senseless stuff

[Shoo Fly]

Very good

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are stunning. It is a rare occurance to come across talent such as yours in terms of graphics. I loved the constantly changing camera angle and the expert shading and animation. The music was a great choice and I liked how you synced it to the movements of the characters. The storyline is good and the length is pretty good. A strange thing to make a movie on, but it is still good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like about this movie were the buttons on the bottom. I thought they could have been a little more subtle. They stick out too much and just don't look good as it is.

[Pube Muppet's rap]

Nice one

^^Good Points^^
Who would have though that a rap done in speakonia would be more appealing to me than most normal rap songs? The lyrics were awesome, loved the beginning, and the end of the movie was quite funny as well. I liked how you made it look like a real music video and had the beat in the background. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well......

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

thanks, it sounds better because sadly it is better then the garbage rap on the radio.

[Pube Muppet goes to hell]

A good episode

^^Good Points^^
Not as good as the episode I just reviewed prior to this (college) but this was still quite funny. I like how pube muppet just rambles on and on about this disgusting shit, but it gives me some pleasure to hear it and it is quite funny. The end was pretty sweet as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, not as good as the one I just watched so I hope the script gets better.

Sir-CannabisClock responds:

this was one of my first submissions to ng, thanks for the review