FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ratbag & Furball]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
I like the characters and will eventually watch the rest of these movies are review them. The intro to this movie really caught my eye and got me interested, however as the movie went on, it proved not to be as good as I thought.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effects were atrocious. It sounds like you just went on a raid of flashkit and got plenty of sounds from there. The sound effects should be a little more discreet. I also think you should use some shading in the graphics, but still the animations and drawings are very good.

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Pal, this submission was my first and my second worst. Move on.

[MssDynamitevsTerriSchiavo]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were very good, especially the drawings, and this is one of the few flashes that blood actually looks good the way it is drawn. I found the "I'll do it, she's my dog" line pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'd like to give this a higher score, but I just can't do it with good conscience, this is kind of wrong...

[The Way of the Sword?]

Could use a some work.

^^Good Points^^
The end scene with the castle had some good animation in it and the camera angle looked really cool. I liked how you changed the camera angles a little bit inthis as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
If you want a mario sprite movie to be good, it must be really good since there are just so many Mario sprite movies. You really didn't change mario's pose enough to make the animations look really smooth. The storyline wasn't very good also. Mario just kicking some ass (how boring) then hes standing in from of a castle. I'd reckon that the next episode would have been fine combined into this one.

[Piggy]

Err...what?

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the music wasn't terrible in this movie. You had good music for each stage of the movie and it was right on que when it changed.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics, mainly the animations need improving. Your pig's legs didn't even move for Guthix's sake! Also, something with little more storyline/comedy would be good.

[Not a Fairy Tale 01]

wut?

^^Good Points^^
The voice overs were good, you chose a good tone for the main character and I like it. Not a bad start to the series, but not a great movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The intro in almost unbearable, it is so long...longer than the movie itself. It's a good thing you added a skip into button in the later episodes. The drawings weren't too good and the whole race scene was just stupid looking.

[Not a Fairy Tale 04]

Mildly funny.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the voice overs in this movie, especially the Spanish sounding guy. The stuff he said about Linens and Things was quite funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
There isn't a whole lot of animation in this movie, which makes it a little boring. Try atleast changing camera angles or have your characters move around. The drawings also weren't that great.

[Fudged 2]

I see much improvement

^^Good Points^^
It's amazing how much you've improved graphically since the first episode of this series. I loved how you did the backgrounds and your character drawings were likewise good. The voice overs were very good and were high quality, much better than the first episode. I found this movie quite funny, especially the "GothMo's"...that's classic.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like how this movie didn't follow a real storyline, it jumped from topic to topic and I would have liked to see it focus more on one certain event.

[FUDGED]

Heh

^^Good Points^^
Though the drawings were a little shoddy, I liked em, they were pretty unique. Some of the insults were pretty funny, and the voice you chose to use was very good. The end was pretty funny too, I didn't expect that to happen.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie has a terrible lack of animation, which makes it slightly bland. The voice overs at the end started to get a little low quality and broke up a little bit.

[Hal Goes camping]

Nice drawings

^^Good Points^^
I really like your drawing and shading, it really looks nice. Very professional and leaves a good impression.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really like the sound effects at all, it just didn't sound right. The storyline was decent, kind of cute but not something I really like that much. You've got great graphical talent, now just work on the storylines more.