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[FF: Pixel Quest II(Toast)]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this was the humor. Max is turning out to be quite a funny character with his rantings on toast. This episode is definitely better than the last.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, I don't see much of a storyline building up here. These guys just met out of no where and now one of them is dead. What are they doing? Where are they going? This is the type of thing I would like to see answered in future episodes.

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Well, as everybody clearly knows, I have absolutely no Flash, storytelling, or productive skills. Thats why a character dies. I'm too weird for my own good.

[FF: Pixel Quest]

Not that bad

^^Good Points^^
I liked the script, I thought it was pretty funny. The storyline was also pretty funny and it made me smile.

^^Needs Improving^^
You graphical skills are...questionable. You need to work on the animations quite a bit, seeing how during the fight scenes, you characters just kind of float around. This could also use voice overs, but don't even bother if you are like 12 years old. The buttons also looked really crappy, but no big deal.

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Meh

[Vegeta and the Machine]

Poor

^^Good Points^^
The voices you used from the show were pretty good and fit the movie well. It is also a funny concept...a man fighting with a soda machine.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the graphics are pretty terrible. You drawings aren't very good at all and the animations are very poor. You animations consist of one frame, even for relatively large movements. Add more frames in between and make the movements more fluid. The storyline was also very predictable and boring and I didn't find it funny.

[Naruto : Missing Chapter]

I like it

^^Good Points^^
After reading the intro to this movie, I thought it would be pointless for me to watch it because I have watched neither the American dubs of Naruto, nor the Japanese originals. However, I still found this to have some humor in it and it made me laugh along the way. I liked how you changed the music. They were all good choices and fit the current scene of each movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were a little strange looking. They could use some more shading and some detail to them. Also I would have atleast liked you to try voice overs, the movie is kind of bland without them.

[Showdown With Goku]

Pure awesomeness!

^^Good Points^^
I've never ever seen a movie done like this one with one real character and one drawn in, which I think is a very cool thing. You did a great job coreographing the fight (it must have been really hard with only one person) and a great job adding in Goku's moves to make it look like he was actually hitting you. Very awesome job.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's unfortunate that you had to rush on this. The animations are very good, but they are a little off in some spots. If you ever get Flash again, this is one thing you should improve on.

[The Bestest Ever Easter]

Nicely done!

^^Good Points^^
This movie is very good. The graphics style is pretty original and was surprisingly well done. The storyline is quite funny and original. I had fun watching this and got a good laugh out of it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just try to increase the detail of the movie next time.

[Any Ghost]

Interesting

^^Good Points^^
I thought the storyline was pretty good. It's original, easy to get in to, and fun to watch. The drawings were also pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this movie wasn't executed too well. It has very little animation, which is usually something included in a movie. The voice overs were also very low and hard to hear and weren't synced at all with the subtitles.

[The Night Santa went mad!]

Good start

^^Good Points^^
You just can't go wrong using weird al music in a flash movie. :)

^^Needs Improving^^
I think this flash could use a lot more detail graphically and needs to go along with the song a little more. For example in the beginning when Al says "he was covered in ammo" you show Santa with only one gun, not really what I had pictured. The graphics in general need a tune up since they aren't very detailed and look really unprofessional, for example the prison drawing and the scene where the elves are running away.

["Presents" (Music Video)]

Bored

^^Good Points^^
The storyline in this wasn't bad and the graphics weren't too shabby either. I liked some of the drawings, and the animations were above average as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't like the music at all, it kind of put me to sleep, and I you could definitely change it, I don't see how it follows the storyline of the movie.

[All your post]

Eh...

^^Good Points^^
The idea behind this flash isn't bad and I like the twist you put on AYB.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really something that I think the NG public will enjoy because I doubt they have been to the CG forums (I know I haven't) so it's not really all that funny.