FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Roffie N' Afro 02]

Childish

^^Good Points^^
Once again, the only really good parts of this movie are the drawings and the music.

^^Needs Improving^^
Once again...the storyline in this is very lacking and the humor is very childish. This has nothing to do with a haircut, has almost no animation and is very poor.

[Roffie N' Afro 01]

Meh

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't too bad. I liked the drawings, which was about the extent of the graphics. The music also was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
The storyline is rather lacking and isn't very funny. This is quite short and isn't very entertaining at all.

[Medieval Madness]

Not very good

^^Good Points^^
I liked the idea, a medieval madness movie, it sounds pretty original tome. I also somewhat like the background music.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie was very boring. The fight scenes were very short and weren't even coreographed very well. Most of them consisted of that one guy making a single stab to kill his opponents, which gets very boring. I'm also surprised you didn't put in any blood, which is characteristic of Madness movies.

[FF: Pixel Quest III]

This is going nowhere..

^^Good Points^^
I'm pretty happy that you added voice overs in this one. They were actually pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said in my previous review, the storyline is completely random. Each episode has very little to do with the previous episode and just branches out into something completely different. This doesn't appeal to me and to most other people.

B0bAnther responds:

Random. Is. The. Game. :P!!! weee spleens

[FF: Pixel Quest II(Toast)]

Funny

^^Good Points^^
The best part about this was the humor. Max is turning out to be quite a funny character with his rantings on toast. This episode is definitely better than the last.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, I don't see much of a storyline building up here. These guys just met out of no where and now one of them is dead. What are they doing? Where are they going? This is the type of thing I would like to see answered in future episodes.

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Well, as everybody clearly knows, I have absolutely no Flash, storytelling, or productive skills. Thats why a character dies. I'm too weird for my own good.

[FF: Pixel Quest]

Not that bad

^^Good Points^^
I liked the script, I thought it was pretty funny. The storyline was also pretty funny and it made me smile.

^^Needs Improving^^
You graphical skills are...questionable. You need to work on the animations quite a bit, seeing how during the fight scenes, you characters just kind of float around. This could also use voice overs, but don't even bother if you are like 12 years old. The buttons also looked really crappy, but no big deal.

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Meh

[Vegeta and the Machine]

Poor

^^Good Points^^
The voices you used from the show were pretty good and fit the movie well. It is also a funny concept...a man fighting with a soda machine.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the graphics are pretty terrible. You drawings aren't very good at all and the animations are very poor. You animations consist of one frame, even for relatively large movements. Add more frames in between and make the movements more fluid. The storyline was also very predictable and boring and I didn't find it funny.