FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ya-Clock: His Story]

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^^Good Points^^
A cool little movie that kind of outlines a piece of history in the Clock Crew. Never heard of Ya-clock, but he seems alright. I liked how this was made to look like an old timey movie, and the music did a good job a tthat.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, really nothing I can say down here. You did what you wanted to do, and good job for that.

[SBC - Taking the portal]

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^^Good Points^^
This looked like a promising movie. It had a good concept and storyline, with the NG server made to be more of a concrete idea. Graphics were fair, I was really looking to see what P-bot was going to do about things.

^^Needs Improving^^
Alas, you didn't finish this, which is quite disappointing. It seemed to have a great storyline going on and I was hoping for some kind of ending better than that. Also, no sound effects made this a little boring.

[F.A.P.S]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, this one left me in stitches! I love how you used speakonia. Not just the voice overs, but also some of the sound effects. Everyone talked really fast, which I found to be quite funny for some reason. Excellent humor that really didn't make sense a lot of the time, but still great.

^^Needs Improving^^
Subtitles maybe. It was kind of hard to hear some of the time.

[Clock Day Anime]

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^^Good Points^^
Interesting idea for a movie. The drawing was actually pretty good. Did you draw it yourself? Also liked the music. It fit the anime theme quite well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really just a single frame, which was quite disappointing. I would have liked to see some actual animation and some storyline to go along with the drawings. Seemed more promising.

[DownWithPubeMuppet!Remake]

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^^Good Points^^
Never saw the original, but this was pretty good. It was quite unexpected to have the pube muppet's pubes get shaved off. That was quite comical. The jaws sound effect was a nice touch to this.

^^Needs Improving^^
It dragged on quite a bit. The music was kind of low quality, which made the length seem really annoying.

WonkyTonkBotty responds:

Umm, thanks; this was only supposed to be a joke movie. The original one's linked in my comments anyway. Thanks for favouritin' me BTW. <3

[B Gets Blammed!]

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^^Good Points^^
I thought the movie was pretty good. The speakonia was funny to listen to, you did a good job with that part. Storyline wasn't bad either. Kind of scary when B gets blammed!

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole right clicking thing to play is kind of annoying. I think you must have some kind of stop(); tag on some of the frames for this to happen. You should check up on that.

WonkyTonkBotty responds:

I remember putting stop thingies in somewhere, but I'm pretty sure I got rid of 'em. Still, can't remember, and don't really care, this is an old movie. :P I've got better things to do.

-AoA

[iShirm&Rena #2 HS]

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Alright, that was a pretty enjoyable collab, I think. iShirm's part was pretty funny, seeing how I wasn't expecting that buy to come out at all. That made me laugh. I guess Rena's part was pretty comical too. Not sure if you are some kind of pumpkin rights activist or something, but it's still a funny spin.

Only thing I really didn't like was the fact that there were only two parts to this. Should have gotten some more of the NN to join in on this one. Another thing, the menu was kind of hard to read.

iShirm responds:

there were only two part because its called ishirm&rena :D but we will have some special guests in the further episodes :P thanks for the review ;)

[Tornado Alley]

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^^Good Points^^
That was definitely an interesting movie. Didn't really get the paradox thing at the end. Was that supposed to be the same cow? That just doesn't really make sense to me, but whatever. Anyway, I liked the sound effects and the flashy background was kind of cool. Hope to see the cow in many adventures in the future.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess I should have put that whole sentence about not understanding the paradox down here. Oh well.

Imacow responds:

Yeah, they were supposed to be the same cow.

[A Clockfriend In Need]

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^^Good Points^^
This was pretty good. Kind of like a story inside of a story. It was kind of corny, but I thought it was pretty good. Graphics were very clean, especially the backgrounds which had lots of details.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voice overs in the duck part were kind of hard to hear. Good thing you had subtitles in this.