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[DumbassDude Short ep 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I really like the background drawings you have done. They are really detailed looking, have good shading, and the blurring is cool too. This episode was pretty funny, I just like the facial expressions in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm pretty sure you know what I will be saying here...don't like the black screen, seems cheap to me.

[DumbassDude Short ep 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty good introduction to this series that has grown pretty rapidly over the past few weeks. I liked how you showed the thought process of dumbass dude; the drawings and animations in this were well done too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't like how you just went to a black screen when he fell down the stairs. Just seems like a cheap way of getting out of actually animating the scene.

[Happy Birthday Zekey!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Birthday movies are always pretty funny, and this one was pretty good. Happy birthday to Zekey, and thanks for making a good effort on this atleast.

^^Needs Improving^^
I had to watch this twice because of the sound. I don't see why you just didn't make this louder to start out with.

MetalDart responds:

Sound was a bitch, I know. It was very low to begin with, so that was the best quality I could work with.

Thanks for the good review dude. :)

[Nail]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another very neat movie from you. The first thing I would like to mention is that you had everything made out of sketchy animated MC's, and without that, this would be really quite boring. I thought the music was pretty good, and this developed more of a storyline than your other movie's I've watched. The ending was pretty ironic too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, I guess you want to keep things simple, but plain green background=boring.

MorrowDays responds:

hehe, do you begin all your reviews with 'K'? kinda off topic. anyways, glad you enjoyed it. I know what you mean about the sketchyness holding it together. I tried watching it without it it, and ya, it was a little dull. Of course, after you've watched anything over and over while testing it, anything will seem dull. The reason I used a plain green background (but it was a cool shade of green nonetheless) was because other stuff would work fine, except when you get to the part where he drops the 500 pound weight from a different place. Because of that, I decided to stick with a simple, one color background, and I thought olive green worked the best. So that is why the background was green.

[Cloudy Day]

K

^^Good Points^^
Interesting movie. This is very abstract, which we don't see very often on NG, filled with hentai and crappy series. Anyway, the music complimented this nicely, and the graphical style was pretty good. I liked the designs in this, and it seems to have some type of deeper meaning. Interesting, I enjoyed watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit short. Animations could have been a lot smoother if you had time to improve the animations.

MorrowDays responds:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. I'll work on making other ones longer.

[DumbassDude Short ep 8]

K

^^Good Points^^
Let's see. You used a lot of blurring effects in this, but they were subtle and placed sporadically, which was nice. I liked the music and sound effects too, they were very clear. The storyline was pretty fun too, I enjoyed watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how your explosion was just a plain white screen, it seems kind of cheap to me.

[No money muffins]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphics were very well done. Very good drawings, coloring, and the lip syncing was pretty well done. Nice job with that, but you should try to make something longer.

^^Needs Improving^^
i knew this was going to be short, but really this is just ridiculous. It isn't really funny at all, and really isn't funny where it ends. Make this longer and add some more storyline to it.

[Bunneh]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, the graphical style was pretty unique. Interesting drawings, and smooth animations in this movie. Kind of a funny storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really wasn't as good as I had anticipated after reading the introduction. Fred the magic blender didn't play a very big part in this, and when he did show up I was quite dismayed. An honest effort, but not the best movie.

Review Request Club.

edit-undo responds:

um... yay!