FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico Speed Sketch]

K

^^Good Points^^
These things are usually pretty cool, and it seems like you've had some experience making these, as it was very well made. The change throughout each frame, which had to be at least a hundred, was very uniform, creating a smooth looking animation.

^^Needs Improving^^
The lighting did change a bit throughout, which was kind of annoying, and could have been easily avoided.

M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the review.

The light variations were caused because every time I went to draw a line and moved my hand back, the light would change and only go back after about 3 - 5 seconds. Considering there was about 800 frames in the movie, I wasn't always prepared to wait 5 seconds, so thats why. But one helpful reviewer told me how to get the light balance write, so it is more or less fixed now.

[Fictional Mind]

K

^^Good Points^^
This looked to be pretty awesome. The effects you used were pretty cool in this. The graphical style and realism in the movements was very good. I also like the staticky overlay. Looks like the full collab will be great.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you'll be lucky to get random people with skill to match yours and make a good collab. I'm sure you would be better off just making a full movie by yourself.

Dvid responds:

I don't have the patience to make full moevies ^^ I do good at flash website tho' but thanks for your confidence anyway :D

[Rock Lobstah!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad at all. I liked the lip syncing on this, that was very well done. The sound clip was high quality, and I really liked the drawings. They had lots of detail and lighting effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the characters were a little odd, didn't really get their correlation there, except that the blue guy's guitar looked like a penis. Anyway, could use some more animation.

[The Happy Happy]

K

^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting movie. I liked most of the storyline in this one, especially everything up to the end. The music complimented the eerie and sad mood of the whole thing, and you did a decent job on drawings and animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending was entirely crappy. The bitmap of the truck looked very bad and it looked like you really rushed the end of this. I was disappointed.

Salone responds:

This whole animation was rushed.

It was my intention from the start to make that truck look like something ripped from the Google image search. Even the bicycle at the beginning was supposed to be like that. But I'm glad that you found positive things from this movie and bothered to point them out.

[TRR: No Underwear]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty funny movie. The music definitely made this great obviously, as it was a pretty funny song. You did a fair job animating to the song as well. Nice and short and to the point.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a little more out of the graphics. The opening scene looked very well done, but then the characters weren't detailed as well and weren't animated really that well.