FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fictional Mind]

K

^^Good Points^^
This looked to be pretty awesome. The effects you used were pretty cool in this. The graphical style and realism in the movements was very good. I also like the staticky overlay. Looks like the full collab will be great.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you'll be lucky to get random people with skill to match yours and make a good collab. I'm sure you would be better off just making a full movie by yourself.

Dvid responds:

I don't have the patience to make full moevies ^^ I do good at flash website tho' but thanks for your confidence anyway :D

[Rock Lobstah!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad at all. I liked the lip syncing on this, that was very well done. The sound clip was high quality, and I really liked the drawings. They had lots of detail and lighting effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the characters were a little odd, didn't really get their correlation there, except that the blue guy's guitar looked like a penis. Anyway, could use some more animation.

[The Happy Happy]

K

^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting movie. I liked most of the storyline in this one, especially everything up to the end. The music complimented the eerie and sad mood of the whole thing, and you did a decent job on drawings and animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending was entirely crappy. The bitmap of the truck looked very bad and it looked like you really rushed the end of this. I was disappointed.

Salone responds:

This whole animation was rushed.

It was my intention from the start to make that truck look like something ripped from the Google image search. Even the bicycle at the beginning was supposed to be like that. But I'm glad that you found positive things from this movie and bothered to point them out.

[TRR: No Underwear]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty funny movie. The music definitely made this great obviously, as it was a pretty funny song. You did a fair job animating to the song as well. Nice and short and to the point.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting a little more out of the graphics. The opening scene looked very well done, but then the characters weren't detailed as well and weren't animated really that well.

[Dockatar: The random guy]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty good. The graphics were surprisingly good. You had some good three dimensional effects in this, and the storyline was kind of interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound wasn't that good. The Speakonia was really low and hard to hear at some points, so you could have made subtitles or made it more audible.

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IZSBHR responds:

OK, thanks (:

[car and driveway]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually thought that this was a pretty good movie. The storyline was pretty good, and your characters were well acted and had some personality to them. There was a good amount of humor in this, which I found quite enjoyable.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics really bring this down. You should use more subtle gradients and just work on the drawings to make them more realistic and detailed.

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crowdedheadspace responds:

thanks and i will keep improving