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[Aplehebbel 2]

What?

^^Good Points^^
You showed a good use of perspective in the beginning with the sheep walking through the town, the physical movement of the town looked pretty realistic. Also nice job on the Rhapsody tune in there and syncing up the animations with the music. Right on key.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings and animations were lacking. You could use some shading and just better drawings. This looks like something I could do, which isn't saying much. The storyline was also a little weird...a sheep running through Germany, then eaten by a dragon...whatever.

Duck-Duck-Sheep responds:

ah....well thank you for the review anyways

[xh4ck captured this 1]

Happy B-Day Pineapple!

^^Good Points^^
I found this movie to be quite good. It made me laugh when Piney was guessing what the gift was, and most of the other script was pretty funny too, like [insert happiness here] and what not. The graphics were pretty good, it was a unique style of drawing.

^^Needs Improvement^^
Even though it was funny, the jokes and storyline in this have been used before, so try to come up with something a little more original next time you make a movie.

Adam-Ant responds:

Don't worry, I'll be sure to come up with some different ideas in the future.

Thanks for the constructive review.

[Lol April Fools]

A good quick laugh

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty decent. I liked the subtle echo of every movement, it is pretty unique. The storyline and humor were definitely the best parts of this movie, there was never a dull moment, and I didn't see that ending coming.

^^Needs Improving^^
Mostly graphical stuff down here. Some different camera angles could have been used to spice up the movie and make it a little more interesting, or some color would be nice.

[CC - Storm]

Boring

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were decent towards the end, but the beginning looked kind of stupid. The sound was good too, mainly the sound effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie is really boring. There are very few funny parts, in fact I didn't actually laugh at all. Work on the storyline a lot and make it more interesting. Also work on the graphics a little bit, too obviously drawn with paintbrush.

[TODD 3: I'm gonna kill...]

Yikes!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, I liked the pokemon part, that was mildly funny, but it doesn't even begin to make up for the many faulty points of this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are very unprofessional. Stick figures are just lame, and you used no gradients or shading at all. The animation was very bad too, you need to atleast moves peoples' legs. The storyline is pretty stupid, it has nothing to do with killing. The voice overs were also very bad. I could go on for much longer, but I know you don't care.

[-SFS 6-]

Groan.

^^Good Points^^
The fight is surprisingly pretty well coreographed. There is quite a bit of action and I found the fight mildly entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
Gradients are ugly, especially in the use of faces. You should have used something other than stick figures, or atleast give them some more definition. Also there is no reason for these two to fight, which I really hate in movies. The ending was also very abrupt, it would atleast be nice to see a winner.

slowz responds:

go to #1 then.

[Light Show FBF]

Good start.

^^Good Points^^
You definitely put a good amount of time into this, and the framerate was really high, which is always a good thing. This movie shows potential.

^^Needs Improving^^
Lines...are bland. Had you put some cool shapes and transformations into this movie, it would have been a lot better. As it is, it is very plain.

[GG - Tie Store]

Quite comical.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphical properties of this movie. I liked how you drew your glocks in a fashion not usually used (with legs and arms) it looked kind of cool. The storyline was pretty funny and made me laugh. I liked the script also.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little bit short and could use some length to it. I also didn't like the part at the end with that blue blob thing.

[C]

No.

Ok, SBC did B. It was completely pointless, yet it was still decent since it kind of is the clock diety so to say, but C? C has much less point than B has and this just doesn't serve any point on NG since it stands for nothing and just makes people want to hate clocks more.

[Only You]

Of all the CJ songs to pick from...

^^Good Points^^
Er...this movie didn't really have any strong point to it. I guess the music is pretty good, but just because it is by CJ. I kind of liked the randomness, but it was just a little bit weird.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, terrible song to choose from CJ's library. I know there is nothing you can do about that now, but just thought I'd point it out. The graphics...Didn't really like how it was all B&W, and the drawings for the most part were just lacking. I really had no idea as to what was going on most of the time, which is never a good thing.