FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TODD 3: I'm gonna kill...]

Yikes!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see, I liked the pokemon part, that was mildly funny, but it doesn't even begin to make up for the many faulty points of this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are very unprofessional. Stick figures are just lame, and you used no gradients or shading at all. The animation was very bad too, you need to atleast moves peoples' legs. The storyline is pretty stupid, it has nothing to do with killing. The voice overs were also very bad. I could go on for much longer, but I know you don't care.

[-SFS 6-]

Groan.

^^Good Points^^
The fight is surprisingly pretty well coreographed. There is quite a bit of action and I found the fight mildly entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
Gradients are ugly, especially in the use of faces. You should have used something other than stick figures, or atleast give them some more definition. Also there is no reason for these two to fight, which I really hate in movies. The ending was also very abrupt, it would atleast be nice to see a winner.

slowz responds:

go to #1 then.

[Light Show FBF]

Good start.

^^Good Points^^
You definitely put a good amount of time into this, and the framerate was really high, which is always a good thing. This movie shows potential.

^^Needs Improving^^
Lines...are bland. Had you put some cool shapes and transformations into this movie, it would have been a lot better. As it is, it is very plain.

[GG - Tie Store]

Quite comical.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the graphical properties of this movie. I liked how you drew your glocks in a fashion not usually used (with legs and arms) it looked kind of cool. The storyline was pretty funny and made me laugh. I liked the script also.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a little bit short and could use some length to it. I also didn't like the part at the end with that blue blob thing.

[C]

No.

Ok, SBC did B. It was completely pointless, yet it was still decent since it kind of is the clock diety so to say, but C? C has much less point than B has and this just doesn't serve any point on NG since it stands for nothing and just makes people want to hate clocks more.

[Only You]

Of all the CJ songs to pick from...

^^Good Points^^
Er...this movie didn't really have any strong point to it. I guess the music is pretty good, but just because it is by CJ. I kind of liked the randomness, but it was just a little bit weird.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, terrible song to choose from CJ's library. I know there is nothing you can do about that now, but just thought I'd point it out. The graphics...Didn't really like how it was all B&W, and the drawings for the most part were just lacking. I really had no idea as to what was going on most of the time, which is never a good thing.

[Event Flux]

Randomness...

^^Good Points^^
It's definitely better than most random animations made, and there were some creative transitions like the smiley face to parachute. The animations were smooth and the music was catchy as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like X said in his review, the black and white is just bland. You should add some colors, and if not that than atleast some shading.

[Boredom Battle]

An epic movie

^^Good Points^^
I'm glad that I discovered your work here on NG, they are truly fun to watch. The animations were, for the most part, excellent. The storyline is likewise excellent and is very creative. It made me laugh a little and definitely made me smile a lot. The sound was a good choice as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I could recommend is to work on the drawings a little bit. I don't really care for how the main character is drawn as well as some other things, like the grass. Other than that, excellent!

[OMG run]

EXPAND NOW!

^^Good Points^^
Immediately when I opened this movie I saw the wonderful preloader. Loved the animation in the preloader and the drawing. The graphics are very impressive, smooth animations and very good drawings. The sound was a good choice and it's pretty entertaining to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seeing this little piece of flash, I want more. I want you to make this into a full length movie, I'm sure if it had a good storyline, it would go damn far. Good luck in the future.

joemama413 responds:

I'm always getting that. I'll try for full length next time. Thanks for the nice comments and helpful insight