FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[dreamer1]

Too short

^^Good Points^^
I liked the song, it was a good choice and added to the mood. A good tribute flash, but definitely not something to submit to the newgrounds public.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, an into longer than the movie itself is never good, so either shorten the intro or make the movie longer, preferably the latter. The animations could use a little improving, but the drawings themselves aren't terrible. Some more storyline could be used in this movie.

[The Badger Song]

Decent

^^Good Points^^
This flash was mildly funny, didn't really make me laugh though. I liked the song, not sure if you made the lyrics yourself, but it was pretty funny. Some good pictures were in here too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main reason this isn't very funny is because it is too similar to the llama one, even in the pictures used. Make your own damn song and I will like it.

[It's Clockday already?]

Good stuff

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were decent, didn't really like all the clock faces though, they looked a little weird. Animations were good though, as were the drawings. I liked the speakonia and the screaming. I was kind of amused by this even though it didn't have a great storyline.

^^Needs Improving^^
Add a better storyline and some length and you are in business.

[Breadfruit Birthday Bash]

Pointless

^^Good Points^^
Err...well it was short, so I didn't have to waste much time watching it. The graphics were decent except for the explosions, which looked really cheesy.

^^Needs Improving^^
This ended very abruptly and I couldn't really weed out a good solid storyline, so that is something to work on. If this had a good storyline, I would say make it longer, but as it is, the length is fine.

[GG - Happy B-day]

yeah...

^^Good Points^^
Err..I'm sure Piney will really like the gift of a flash movie made for him, which is what really counts here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just about everything. The graphics were very unprofessionally drawn, the speakonia is very hard to hear, it is short, has almost no storyline...you get the idea.

vBulletinClock responds:

You're not very familiar with glock movies eh?

(This is actually a good review, you didn't start "YOU SUCK MAJOR DICK!!!" i congratulate you for that.)

[Aplehebbel 2]

What?

^^Good Points^^
You showed a good use of perspective in the beginning with the sheep walking through the town, the physical movement of the town looked pretty realistic. Also nice job on the Rhapsody tune in there and syncing up the animations with the music. Right on key.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings and animations were lacking. You could use some shading and just better drawings. This looks like something I could do, which isn't saying much. The storyline was also a little weird...a sheep running through Germany, then eaten by a dragon...whatever.

Duck-Duck-Sheep responds:

ah....well thank you for the review anyways

[xh4ck captured this 1]

Happy B-Day Pineapple!

^^Good Points^^
I found this movie to be quite good. It made me laugh when Piney was guessing what the gift was, and most of the other script was pretty funny too, like [insert happiness here] and what not. The graphics were pretty good, it was a unique style of drawing.

^^Needs Improvement^^
Even though it was funny, the jokes and storyline in this have been used before, so try to come up with something a little more original next time you make a movie.

Adam-Ant responds:

Don't worry, I'll be sure to come up with some different ideas in the future.

Thanks for the constructive review.

[Lol April Fools]

A good quick laugh

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty decent. I liked the subtle echo of every movement, it is pretty unique. The storyline and humor were definitely the best parts of this movie, there was never a dull moment, and I didn't see that ending coming.

^^Needs Improving^^
Mostly graphical stuff down here. Some different camera angles could have been used to spice up the movie and make it a little more interesting, or some color would be nice.