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[¥Chazerkstarn]

Better.

^^Good Points^^
This installment to the series is definitely better than the last, but mainly because of one reason only. That reason is the use of that weird looking old lady and her asking to look at her knits. Quite funny. Oh and her tone in speakonia is perfect.

^^Needs Improvement^^
I'm disappointed how the speakonia now doesn't even sound anything like what the text says, this is just annoying. Like I said in my review of the last part of this series, give it a rest.

smackhouse responds:

no

[bupo is a block!]

Not that bad.

^^Good Points^^
Well, I'm not exactly sure which single factor caused me to like this movie at all. Perhaps it was the great use of speakonia, or the funny script, I'm not really sure. Those two factors there were the best part of this movie. After the initial scene, I laughed a lot at what went on. Though it was completely random, it was still fun to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Take out that little scene that is supposed to make the watcher jump, those things are really stupid. Also, it's all right that you made a movie that really has no storyline, but making one with a storyline would be so much better.

[NewbieScape 4 Members]

Another good episode

^^Good Points^^
It's funny, I was just thinking about this series the other day thinking if you were every going to put out a new episode, and today here it is sitting in the portal. The voice overs and script are entertaining as always. I found the picture of zezima to be quite funny and all the scamming parts. This was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are really the only part in this movie that people may find unattractive. I know it is the style of the series, but there could really be some adjustments.

Lopaxe responds:

yes, i really need improvement, but i wont dom it better =p i am a graphic loser, all i got is ideas and bugs. yes, all sorta bugs. thx for review!

[LL - The NightMare]

Not very good.

^^Good Points^^
The music was definitely the strongest point in this movie. Not sure if you meant for the music to sound low qual, but it did, but went well with the mood of the story.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics definitely could use some revision. Some of the drawings are kind of bumpy, and there is very little detail. I didn't particularly thing there was a great deal of thought put into this flash, and it was pretty boring. I also didn't like the ending. A little bit too abrupt.

[Lets Play Some Tetris]

Very nice!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see. Though you say you can't draw, I found your drawings to be quite well done. I liked how you drew the characters, but other parts, like the tree could use a little work. I liked the animations too, very smooth and well synced with the music at the end. The sudden addition of sound at the end was just great, loved it. The storyline was great as well and I guess this had a good moral.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said above, certain parts of the graphics weren't too great, and sound in the beginning would have made the flash a lot more interesting.

UrbanNinja06 responds:

yeah i cant draw... I had a graphics tablet when i drew the characters and then i got OS X and the tablet software messed up and wouldnt work so the rest was drawn with the mouse... dam technology

[Metal Gear Awesome]

Well that was retarted.

^^Good Points^^
Well, there were some funny points and I liked how it sort of followed the storyline of the game itself. The graphics were pretty well drawn, though not the best I've seen. Voice overs were decent, still not that great.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was really quite disappointed in this movie. The preloader was very bland. I didn't like how the movie was extremely fast paced. I just didn't like this very much. This movie doesn't do the game any good.

[¥Sloveeier]

Not your best work.

^^Good Points^^
The graphics...they were good in certain ways, but not good enough for a score higher than four. For example, I like the definition in the graphics. I also like the voices. Well done and original, though I don't really like the british type accent.

^^Needs Improving^^
This series, though short, has sort of reached its end already. This definitely wasn't the best one in the series. If you are going to continue this series, please atleast have some variety and make some differences in the movies besides one character and a few words.

smackhouse responds:

Im always open to critisism just not right now.

[Ufo]

It's alright.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the idea behind this movie and the storyline. The graphics were also a strong point, though the stick figures were a bad choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie definitely needs a preloader of some sort. The sound quality of the beginning also didn't sound quite right. You really need to improve the graphics more though. Stick figures are a big no-no and you didn't use much shading.