FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NewbieScape 4 Members]

Another good episode

^^Good Points^^
It's funny, I was just thinking about this series the other day thinking if you were every going to put out a new episode, and today here it is sitting in the portal. The voice overs and script are entertaining as always. I found the picture of zezima to be quite funny and all the scamming parts. This was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are really the only part in this movie that people may find unattractive. I know it is the style of the series, but there could really be some adjustments.

Lopaxe responds:

yes, i really need improvement, but i wont dom it better =p i am a graphic loser, all i got is ideas and bugs. yes, all sorta bugs. thx for review!

[LL - The NightMare]

Not very good.

^^Good Points^^
The music was definitely the strongest point in this movie. Not sure if you meant for the music to sound low qual, but it did, but went well with the mood of the story.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics definitely could use some revision. Some of the drawings are kind of bumpy, and there is very little detail. I didn't particularly thing there was a great deal of thought put into this flash, and it was pretty boring. I also didn't like the ending. A little bit too abrupt.

[Lets Play Some Tetris]

Very nice!

^^Good Points^^
Let's see. Though you say you can't draw, I found your drawings to be quite well done. I liked how you drew the characters, but other parts, like the tree could use a little work. I liked the animations too, very smooth and well synced with the music at the end. The sudden addition of sound at the end was just great, loved it. The storyline was great as well and I guess this had a good moral.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said above, certain parts of the graphics weren't too great, and sound in the beginning would have made the flash a lot more interesting.

UrbanNinja06 responds:

yeah i cant draw... I had a graphics tablet when i drew the characters and then i got OS X and the tablet software messed up and wouldnt work so the rest was drawn with the mouse... dam technology

[Metal Gear Awesome]

Well that was retarted.

^^Good Points^^
Well, there were some funny points and I liked how it sort of followed the storyline of the game itself. The graphics were pretty well drawn, though not the best I've seen. Voice overs were decent, still not that great.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was really quite disappointed in this movie. The preloader was very bland. I didn't like how the movie was extremely fast paced. I just didn't like this very much. This movie doesn't do the game any good.

[¥Sloveeier]

Not your best work.

^^Good Points^^
The graphics...they were good in certain ways, but not good enough for a score higher than four. For example, I like the definition in the graphics. I also like the voices. Well done and original, though I don't really like the british type accent.

^^Needs Improving^^
This series, though short, has sort of reached its end already. This definitely wasn't the best one in the series. If you are going to continue this series, please atleast have some variety and make some differences in the movies besides one character and a few words.

smackhouse responds:

Im always open to critisism just not right now.

[Ufo]

It's alright.

^^Good Points^^
I liked the idea behind this movie and the storyline. The graphics were also a strong point, though the stick figures were a bad choice.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie definitely needs a preloader of some sort. The sound quality of the beginning also didn't sound quite right. You really need to improve the graphics more though. Stick figures are a big no-no and you didn't use much shading.

["Splatz Ep. 1"]

Interesting...

^^Good Points^^
The graphics are definitely the strong point in this movie. There are some good animations that are pretty smooth, and the drawings aren't terrible either. I think the music is pretty good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie has no storyline at all. There is no intro to characters and we are given no reason as to why all these little circle dudes are fighting. The sound effects were really overpowering and too loud in comparison to the music, and anything you did with a mic was really low quality. The end is also very abrupt. I'm not particularly disappointed that you aren't going to continue this series.

[GG - Wade Day 2005!]

So far your best movie.

^^Good Points^^
This movie had just a very funny mood to it. I liked your drawing of Wade and how you misspelled Fulp in the begginning. Script and animations were quite funny, and the low quality just added to the funny mood, and the Moskau music went perfectly.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would have liked to see a longer version of this since it is quite funny. The graphics could have been improved a lot and still had the same effect.

[GG - 11/25: Dual_Glock]

Err...

^^Good Points^^
I'll admit that I liked the drawing and the music. Nice shading, and interesting choice of music. There really isn't much else to say about this flash in terms of good points.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, there was almost no animation at all, which I really find annoying in flashes. And hell, for what was offered, the filesize was fricken huge. So um...yeah.

[GG - Dual_Glock Movies]

Decent.

^^Good Points^^
This movie started off good with a comical preloader, always good to get the user laughing while waiting for a load. The movies themselves, I only found the DDR one to be any good at all, and it was just a loop. The song I found to be good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the menu for the movies was quite bland, if you ever make an update, definitely work on this. The movies themselves...I guess they were a little bit comical, but really they weren't too entertaining.