FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Usual Hood Rats]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The art wasn't too bad. Looks like you've got some skill drawing people.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really bad for an intro. First off, it's not a game or interactive at all. Not a big issue, but whatever. Also, this had no intro to the storyline or characters, just what they looked like. You could have added some scene to show the storyline or at least some kind of animation skills.

[FbF Attack]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This definitely shows that you have a lot of skill in FBF animation. Every part of this was extremely smooth and extremely well animated to look like a realistic animation. Also a lot of detail in the drawings, which was surprising, seeing how this was FBF animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really much I can say. You should give your work at a longer movie with a more involved storyline.

Review Request Club

Soupcat responds:

Thanks! I didn't know it was THAT smooth.

Okay, I did. =p
Well my motto while animating is and always will be "It's the details that count"
Something I found out in the beginning, and I will stick to this for the rest of my life.

It's nice to hear that there isn't much room for improving, besides the plot issue.
Been discussed in previous reviews ^^
Again, I know this, and I'm working on this, thanks for the commentary, it shows how deeply this is needed on NG.

I actually started this out of the blue, just drawing shit, not knowing where I was going. And then I got this little idea, and built it up.
Anyway, again, thanks! I love your club, and I will contribute when I find some spare time ^^

<3.

[Resident Evil-Mon]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Though you didn't animate much, I kind of like the stillframe stuff in here. It didn't look too bad. Kind of funny towards the end too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This got a bit off topic, however. Towards the end it was just a fight between Gary Coleman and Ronald McDonald, which had nothing to do with Pokemon or Resident evil. Try to stay more on topic next time. The ending was unsatisfying.

[Boy (full)]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
That was a really neat movie. Your animations are really smooth, especially moving around the objects to look realistic. Nice music, went well with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't really like was the pace. It moved really slowly, especially towards the end of this.

[Un-named]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I like how the viewer could control the text as they pleased.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really use the gradients too well. They were mostly just ugly looking. Could use some sound effects with some tuned down music, just to put more focus on the movie itself.

[Chinese Restaurant]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The graphics looked pretty nice. You have some good drawing skill, and you had good shading as well. The music sounded pretty cool in this movie as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Your animation could use some improvement. The hands/arms just looked a little weird to me. Also, it was hard to get into this, since it didn't really seem to have much of a storyline at all.

[Souped-up Civic]

Not bad

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty good. They seemed to get a lot better by the second scene with the train crash. Some nice drawings and coloring in that part.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effects didn't seem to line up quite right at some points. Other than that, the beginning of this was a little bit boring to me, and a bit too bold as well. Just calling someone stupid in the beginning doesn't help your score out much.

[Reading Rainbow 2]

Again, decent.

^^Good Points^^
A little better than the first. It started out a little better and wasn't quite as annoying. It was actually kind of interesting in the beginning.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty crude, they need updating. The sound clips seemed to overlap a bit, which was pretty annoying. After a while it just went into random clips that didn't really have anything to do with the storyline.

[Reading Rainbow 1]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I guess it was mildly funny. A decent parody of that show, which was never that great to start out with.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really find this too funny. You bleeped out a lot of parts, and I couldn't even understand what the hell you were bleeping out. It didn't make much sense to me. What was said wasn't really that funny. Overall I was just bored while watching this one.

[The Haus of Fahts II]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad. The art was really good quality, as you always produce in your movies. The humor was definitely there, I got a laugh out of just the sheer ridiculousness of it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The ending is what really turns me off to this. It wasn't a very satisfying ending, and it definitely left me wanting a bit more.