FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[No Touchy]

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^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good movie, which I voted to protect. The graphics are very clean. Nice camera movement and shading in this. I liked the dream scene with the guy finding diamonds in the box. The ending was pretty cool, as it was kind of unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing really major I can say. The file size seems a bit big for the length of this. It was less than 30 seconds, so you could probably get the filesize down.

[A Random Slice of Pie]

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^^Good Points^^
Not really my style of movies, but it wasn't that bad. Some parts of this you had decent animations, and your random ideas were funny most of the time. It was entertaining to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing that bugged me was the sound quality. Anything that went through your microphone was just terrible and very hard on the ears. Even sound effects that I don't think you made were low quality.

[Awesome the Hedgehog]

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^^Good Points^^
I always liked the really funny and fast paced nature of your type of movie, and you did it well in this one. Very funny vocals and observations about the game.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really needed some more to it. It was way too short and I was really disappointed when it said the end. In fact, I didn't believe it at first. Quite disappointing.

[Awesome Compilation Vol 1]

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^^Good Points^^
That was a pretty awesome compilation of different video game spoofs. I think the best was was Resident Awesome 4, especially at the end with the Yeti thing from that ski game. The voice acting in the Mario part was pretty well done as well. Overall, a very funny compilation.

^^Needs Improving^^
Only three sections to this? And just that with the pac-man one lacking a bit. I think you should have added at least one more spoof to this.

[Jay Short # 1!]

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^^Good Points^^
You definitely had good graphics in this. I liked the animations, they were pretty good, even the running animations, which I know are hard to do. I also liked the music. I didn't go with the carnage, but at least it went with the sunny day.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure exactly what to say. It was a little random and a little bit sick, not quite sure I liked it that much. It is really short, which I expected, but not too satisfying either.

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Yeah these Jay shorts are pretty much ment to be random shorts of things Jay thinks of and I animated.
The Jay vs. Val and The Duders are much better.

[Miko Miko NURSE!]

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^^Good Points^^
A real quality fanimutation. The music was crazy and really interesting to listen to, and also very fast paced, which is needed in a movie like this. Lots of different images and lots of surprises.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really do anything with the lyrics, which is usually done in this type of movie.

[Shit The Cops!!!!!]

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^^Good Points^^
Uh, well I guess it's just mildly funny, even though it doesn't make much sense at all. Like the sound effect as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, this isn't a game, which you listed it as. Second, it's very short, and except for that one sound effects, it's silent the whole time. Not very good graphically either. Needs something to make it more interesting.