FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Awesome the Hedgehog]

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^^Good Points^^
I always liked the really funny and fast paced nature of your type of movie, and you did it well in this one. Very funny vocals and observations about the game.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really needed some more to it. It was way too short and I was really disappointed when it said the end. In fact, I didn't believe it at first. Quite disappointing.

[Awesome Compilation Vol 1]

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^^Good Points^^
That was a pretty awesome compilation of different video game spoofs. I think the best was was Resident Awesome 4, especially at the end with the Yeti thing from that ski game. The voice acting in the Mario part was pretty well done as well. Overall, a very funny compilation.

^^Needs Improving^^
Only three sections to this? And just that with the pac-man one lacking a bit. I think you should have added at least one more spoof to this.

[Jay Short # 1!]

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^^Good Points^^
You definitely had good graphics in this. I liked the animations, they were pretty good, even the running animations, which I know are hard to do. I also liked the music. I didn't go with the carnage, but at least it went with the sunny day.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure exactly what to say. It was a little random and a little bit sick, not quite sure I liked it that much. It is really short, which I expected, but not too satisfying either.

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Yeah these Jay shorts are pretty much ment to be random shorts of things Jay thinks of and I animated.
The Jay vs. Val and The Duders are much better.

[Miko Miko NURSE!]

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^^Good Points^^
A real quality fanimutation. The music was crazy and really interesting to listen to, and also very fast paced, which is needed in a movie like this. Lots of different images and lots of surprises.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really do anything with the lyrics, which is usually done in this type of movie.

[Shit The Cops!!!!!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Uh, well I guess it's just mildly funny, even though it doesn't make much sense at all. Like the sound effect as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, this isn't a game, which you listed it as. Second, it's very short, and except for that one sound effects, it's silent the whole time. Not very good graphically either. Needs something to make it more interesting.

[The Usual Hood Rats]

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^^Good Points^^
The art wasn't too bad. Looks like you've got some skill drawing people.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really bad for an intro. First off, it's not a game or interactive at all. Not a big issue, but whatever. Also, this had no intro to the storyline or characters, just what they looked like. You could have added some scene to show the storyline or at least some kind of animation skills.

[FbF Attack]

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^^Good Points^^
This definitely shows that you have a lot of skill in FBF animation. Every part of this was extremely smooth and extremely well animated to look like a realistic animation. Also a lot of detail in the drawings, which was surprising, seeing how this was FBF animated.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really much I can say. You should give your work at a longer movie with a more involved storyline.

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Soupcat responds:

Thanks! I didn't know it was THAT smooth.

Okay, I did. =p
Well my motto while animating is and always will be "It's the details that count"
Something I found out in the beginning, and I will stick to this for the rest of my life.

It's nice to hear that there isn't much room for improving, besides the plot issue.
Been discussed in previous reviews ^^
Again, I know this, and I'm working on this, thanks for the commentary, it shows how deeply this is needed on NG.

I actually started this out of the blue, just drawing shit, not knowing where I was going. And then I got this little idea, and built it up.
Anyway, again, thanks! I love your club, and I will contribute when I find some spare time ^^

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