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[Tywo At Large Ep. #3]

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^^Good Points^^
Definitely a worthwhile ten minutes of my life. I was entertained throughout. The voice acting was done very well and the effects put on voices at certain times was a good idea. Storyline was quite interesting. I liked the Breakfast Club scene, that made me laugh. Great movie, keep it up!

^^Needs Improving^^
Well can't really say too much here. The way you mixed the voice of the VP at the end sounded kind of off.

Pixmintro responds:

I'll try harder with that, the only reason we spliced two voices together was because the actress couldn't get enough "gravel" in her voice. :)

[LL- Turd's Ban Day]

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^^Good Points^^
Brilliant work turd-lock. Loved the audio in this one. Interesting sound effects when turd was reading the newspaper, and the sped up scatman at the end was awesome. Short and sweet.

^^Needs Improving^^
Umm...good stuff.

turd-lock responds:

much thanks

[Spidey Trial]

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^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty good. Definitely above average for your first movie. You added some good sound effects in here too. I'm sure the second episode will be even more successful than this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs some music to fill in the gaps. The beginning I have no suggestions, but something ambient would fit well towards the end.

Rock3guito responds:

Thank you for your comments, especially those who point out my mistakes to improve my work.

I promise that the second part will be much better

[LL - Pumpkin Meets MP3]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, I don't know the situation at the LL right now, but I suppose this kind of cleared it up. I could have guessed that a bunch of assholes are trolling the forums. Graphics were nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
I approve of Spongebob Squarepants, but not whatever stupid new episode/movie that song came from. Mr Sun is cool though.

[LL - Teh Edn]

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^^Good Points^^
It was a pretty quick load. The flashing background aroused my senses for a few seconds. A different feeling than being dead all the time.

^^Needs Improving^^
The title is a bit strange. The edn? It's more the "The beggnig" or something. You can hardly call a preloader the edn. For this technicality, I deduct half a point, which still rounds up to ten. Happy Ban Day!

[LL - Bitch]

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^^Good Points^^
Graphics were very good. Nice lighting effects, definitely can tell you know what you are doing. Voice acting was very clear, nicely done.

^^Needs Improving^^
Story wise this was a little bit lacking. I found it pretty boring and repetitive and turned it off after a few minutes. Happy Ban day anyway!

MagicWandLock responds:

Thank you for constructive criticism.

[LL - Ban Day]

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^^Good Points^^
Pretty good use of sound effects and speakonia. The laughing and bouncing sounds made this more interesting. Also nice graphical effects and such. Made quickly, but with good quality.

^^Needs Improving^^
Time Paradox. if pear banned himself who the hell is going to ban everyone that doesn't make a movie?

EraserLock responds:

Paradox indeed. Who knows...

[LL - Wait, what the fuck?]

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^^Good Points^^
Ahh, ban day. I didn't realize it was today, but I shall enjoy watching some lock movies. This one was the first I watched and a good way to start things out. It actually made me laugh out loud. Actually I did one of those laughs that kind of sounds like a cough mixed with a sneeze or something. But I still liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Some idiots will complain that it is too short, but alas, they are idiots. This is going in my favorites.

[Father & Son In: Trip]

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^^Good Points^^
For your first submission it's not bad work. You've got a few good animation techniques in this movie, like the trees in the foreground and background during the walking scene. Some comical parts in this movie, and I think the censorship actually worked to the advantage here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, first thing that I didn't like was the voice acting. Speak a bit more clearly, had a hard time hearing sometimes. Also, seemed a little disjointed. Like what happened with that deer or whatever that popped out of the bush? I was expecting something more than just the dad freaking out in that scene.

Review Request Club

[gouistory]

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^^Good Points^^
Maplestory sprites are pretty neat to use, they are very defined. Animation wasn't bad, storyline ended up not being so bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly a bit boring for most of the time. Needs some more realistic dialogue and needs to move a bit faster. Keep working on it...not bad for being your first sprite animation.