FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Illegal Ferret Salesman]

(title in work)

Ugh, had a hard time staying awake during this one. The repetitive animations and drawn out dialouge was really boring to me. You should have definitely got to the point of this whole movie quite a bit faster. Also work on animating a bit more than just tweening back and forth.

[one crazy-ass flash]

(title in work)

Meh, this was pretty poor. First off, no way this should be 7.3 MB, that's way too much. You need to compress your audio a bit. Sound effects and voice acting was kind of annoying and sounded forced. Redeeming part was the guy dancing around at the end, that was pretty funny looking.

[The Retro Skateboard]

(title in work)

An interesting movie here. The drawing was great. I definitely think that is your strong point in this movie. The voice acting, or what little there was of it was well done too. A nice little storyline here, and overall it has a lot of good characteristics that a short flash should have.

LinkXRetro responds:

thanks, i am glad you liked it

[The Retracto-Lock]

(title in work)

Not bad for a school project by someone learning to use flash. The animations got the point across. The music was definitely a good choice. Isn't this the same song they use in the Mac commercials? Anyway, keep up the work, and you'll get better.

[The drummer]

(title in work)

Ok, this wasn't too bad. The FBF animations were pretty smooth, keep working on it and you'll get much better in time. The ending was a surprise and the surprise factor of it made me laugh a bit. Only thing I didn't like was the drum sounds didn't seem to match the part of the drum he was hitting sometimes. Not a big deal though.

[Cooking cookies]

(title in work)

Hmm...quite entertaining, which surprised me. I thought this was going to be quite boring, but the script was actually funny. Nice job with the speakonia voices, they reminded me a bit of the old pube muppet movies that I am such a fan of. Graphics could have been improved a bit. The way this was made should not have taken you four hours, so simplify your process.