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[Castle Crashing The Clay]

(title in work)

I think it's pretty obvious from this work that you are just starting out with stop motion animations. Some basic things you need to work on...first off, keeping the camera steady. During the first scene it was really wobbly, which is quite noticeable. Also, some better scenery than a chair in the background would be nice. Just making something out of cardboard and construction paper would be better. Also, length is an issue here. I know you're just starting, and it's good practice, but there really isn't much content here.

Review Request Club.

[widescreen]

(title in work)

This was a decent movie. It had pretty good visuals and a good soundtrack as well. The storyline wasn't bad either. I just think it moved way too slowly to be that interesting. The text was very slow as were most of the scenes in developing. Move this along a bit faster, and it will be more interesting.

[CKY- call to a porn shop]

(title in work)

That was pretty pointless. You just put the sound clip on with a static background. I would have expected an animation to this or something, but it was really just the sound clip. Unfortunately the visuals don't offer anything, so I can't rate this any higher. Please add animation next time.

[The Hatchet]

(title in work)

I remember the book from middle school. A bad book, and not a great movie either. It was kind of odd, the character was drawn very well with lots of detail, but the backgrounds looked so simple and amateurish. I can't really blame you for the storyline in this, since it's based on the book, but it really just wasn't an interesting movie.

[Shinobu]

(title in work)

This was not that good. It's basically just a bunch of shape tweens, nothing really impressive or skillful here. You didn't draw much in here, just text and some images. Needs a lot of work in animations for it to be better. Music was good though...from DDR if I remember correctly.

[Gonzo & Cat Adventures 4]

(title in work)

The intro was really quite good. The textures were cool, and the animations and drawings went perfectly with the music. Set up a nice tone. However, what I'm assuming is the only part original to this, after that first scene was really poorly done. Poor animations and a lack luster storyline that doesn't really go anywhere. A bit disappointing.

[The Happy Squid]

(title in work)

Another spoil of the Clock Day aftermath! Not a bad loop, per say but also not too interesting. The graphics were good, but really generic for a loop. At least the squid was happy, that's a good thing!

[321STARS]

(title in work)

I always like seeing music videos done to DDR songs! You did a great job on this. You synced the animations well to the music and even took advantage of some of the strange sound effects in this song. Well animated and drawn as well, with lots of nice effects. A good music video.

DunderAxel responds:

Thankyou. :3

[Slurpee slappin']

(title in work)

It is a shame that people simply don't understand the humor that is in this movie. It is indeed quite funny in the way you animated slurpeeclock banning everyone. I thought it was quite funny with the contrast of the nonchalant humming in the background. Very funny, I liked it.