FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Curious Carl- Episode One]

(title in work)

Well, not much of an episode here really. It was quite short and didn't have much of a conclusion. The next episode should definitely be longer. Your animations weren't bad, but you could have added some color in to this. I did enjoy your sound effects as well. They gave this a very cartoonish feel.

Bjorvy responds:

Thanks! Some information though: I've used no colors because I wanted it to be really like, easy and calm. And I will definetly make the episodes longer.

[Overkill03]

(title in work)

Not too bad. For what is pretty much something that only you fully understand it was still entertaining. A bit unexpected, but that's part of what makes it good. Graphically it was decent. I didn't really get the screaming sound effects though, seeing as how there is really no one around O.o

[Complicated]

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Heh, classic Clock Crew! The ending was definitely unexpected, and you could certainly call that situation "complicated". I like how you took the time to set this up with him trying to impress RadishClock's sister and what not. It just made the ending that much better.

[Halo 3elieve]

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Definitely a short that takes after the Egoraptor style of game parodies. It's pretty funny, and you did some good voice acting, but the sound quality was still pretty bad. Your microphone is likely the problem, as it doesn't pick up your screaming into the microphone all that well.

[Secret Agent Man Trailer]

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I really don't see the point for having a trailer for a music video. A music video isn't usually long as it is, so having a trailer that simply copies the James Bond animation really doesn't do much for me. I could understand more if you were a high profile artist, but well, I'd rather see the full work then this.

[Sad Link]

(title in work)

This had a pretty good gag to go along with it. I like how you set this up, in the beginning you obviously have no idea why Link is so sad, and then you pan out to show us why. It's definitely well done in that sense. A bit short I think, especially considering the 3.2 meg filesize. A fun little short nonetheless.

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J0hnnyR0tt3n responds:

well thanks!

[Don't Fuck With Tray]

(title in work)

It was good I suppose. The morphing animation came out very well. I would have never guess it was your first time doing it, as it looks really well done. I liked the radio studio scene. That's what I originally thought this clip was from, and perhaps it is, it's kind of hard to tell from the description of the audio. Short, but well done. A good testament to your animating skills.

[The Blues]

(title in work)

This was alright, but I feel kind of like it was lacking a bit of comedy. I thought towards the beginning it was pretty humorous, but after that it seemed more just like a story to me rather than a comedy. There was really nothing to make this go out with a bang either, which is what I expected. Graphically it was nice looking. Not incredibly well animated, but the effects were nice.

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[Castle Crashing The Clay]

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I think it's pretty obvious from this work that you are just starting out with stop motion animations. Some basic things you need to work on...first off, keeping the camera steady. During the first scene it was really wobbly, which is quite noticeable. Also, some better scenery than a chair in the background would be nice. Just making something out of cardboard and construction paper would be better. Also, length is an issue here. I know you're just starting, and it's good practice, but there really isn't much content here.

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