FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TaT's A.Y.B.A.B.T.U]

(title in work)

Hmm...Not sure exactly what to say here. You seem to switch between good and then terrible drawings at random parts in the movie. Try not to use shape tweens so much, they always look terrible, especially with fills. Progression through the movie was very slow and boring.

[Madness God]

(title in work)

This is your pretty average madness movie. The fight scenes weren't bad, and the scenery was nice too. You need to increase your framerate and make your animations a bit faster as well. Also, the camera view not changing at all got pretty boring. Learn to use v-cam some time.

greenpolice responds:

I didn't want to use V-cam, the backgrounds are to small for characters, v-cam would magnify and throw it off.

[Phoenix Very Wrong]

(title in work)

Meh, I have a very slow interweb connection here, and waiting for the 5.1mb to load was not really worth it. Nothing in here really made me laugh. Just another PW fan video. Work on compressing your audio and syncing it, as you said in your description.

[Grey Blood]

(title in work)

Lol, that was amazing. I couldn't stop laughing at it, therefore, it goes in my favorites. The physcotic side of it was pretty entertaining. And the music that you put in this definitely set the crazy mood of the characters. Made no sense, but I love it. Awesome.

CSanimations responds:

Wow, thanks man! You understood it wasn't meant to make sense, and that's great!

[Nintendo Story ep 3]

(title in work)

Yeah, this wasn't too bad. I didn't have much of an idea of what was going on in this movie, but still the fight scenes were fairly well coreographed. I thought you picked good music and sound effects throughout. Work on the drawings though, that's what makes this not so interesting.

[First Letter Last Letter]

(title in work)

I found this quite entertaining. It made no sense, and the words used were quite interesting, which I guess equals entertainment. So anyway, I thought you did a good job on this. As you said, animations and drawings weren't amazing, but you did a good enough job for me.

Aqlex responds:

Nice, I'm happy you were entertained! I promise to be making (and I have already made) more interesting animations with actual stories going on. Thanks for the review!

[My Dream]

(title in work)

Very good movie, my friend. The graphics definitely made this what it is. Excellent job on color contrast and shading. The animations were very advanced as well. Also a good storyline, though. You definitely have something going here, can't wait to see the next episode. I'm sure it won't disappoint.

[Werehog Attack]

(title in work)

Keep working on it, man. The animations weren't terrible, I've definitely seen worse, but with some practice you'll get better. My first tip would be to have a background. Also you need to zoom in on your scenes a bit. This was a very wide view, and everything was very small, which isn't good.

ry64 responds:

Thanks.

[Scary Stuff]

(title in work)

Quite good, fine sir. You've definitely got some skill in using effects in Flash. I liked the sudden turn this took in the beginning, that definitely made this interesting. Great drawings and decent animation as well. The only thing I think was weak was the voice acting. You just don't have the voice for it I think.

SkoolCool responds:

thanks
I don't usually use too much effects in flash so it was weird using them now, glad I used them well
curious, I have some nice voice acting (thats what people say) but for comedy animation. my voice clearly don't work for scary things, it's too high-pitched
thanks for the review

[Mario's detrail]

(title in work)

Haha, I wasn't too impressed by this to be honest, though I did find myself watching the loop about 30 times through before I actually turned it off. You at least made it kind of funny to watch over and over. Animation wasn't bad either. You should take a stab at a full sprite movie some time.