FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Big Bag.]

(title in work)

Big bag...my friends always say that, I guess this song is where it came from. Movie was interesting. Nice graphical style, and great animations. I was a little disappointed by the ending though. Seemed a little bit abrupt to me, but overall an entertaining movie.

[An Odd Humpty Dumpty]

(title in work)

This was an interesting Flash. The artistic style was very strange and unique for this website. The storyline was pretty enjoyable. You took an old classic and modified it. I didn't like how long the thrice scene was playing, that was kind of annoying. Also, make the voices a bit louder next time. Hard to hear them.

Naytronic5000 responds:

I noticed some audio issues myself. With the song being long, I really wanted "Here on top of the world" to be said which at the end of the chorus. Anyway THANKS A MILLION!!!

[TaT's A.Y.B.A.B.T.U]

(title in work)

Hmm...Not sure exactly what to say here. You seem to switch between good and then terrible drawings at random parts in the movie. Try not to use shape tweens so much, they always look terrible, especially with fills. Progression through the movie was very slow and boring.

[Madness God]

(title in work)

This is your pretty average madness movie. The fight scenes weren't bad, and the scenery was nice too. You need to increase your framerate and make your animations a bit faster as well. Also, the camera view not changing at all got pretty boring. Learn to use v-cam some time.

greenpolice responds:

I didn't want to use V-cam, the backgrounds are to small for characters, v-cam would magnify and throw it off.

[Phoenix Very Wrong]

(title in work)

Meh, I have a very slow interweb connection here, and waiting for the 5.1mb to load was not really worth it. Nothing in here really made me laugh. Just another PW fan video. Work on compressing your audio and syncing it, as you said in your description.

[Grey Blood]

(title in work)

Lol, that was amazing. I couldn't stop laughing at it, therefore, it goes in my favorites. The physcotic side of it was pretty entertaining. And the music that you put in this definitely set the crazy mood of the characters. Made no sense, but I love it. Awesome.

CSanimations responds:

Wow, thanks man! You understood it wasn't meant to make sense, and that's great!

[Nintendo Story ep 3]

(title in work)

Yeah, this wasn't too bad. I didn't have much of an idea of what was going on in this movie, but still the fight scenes were fairly well coreographed. I thought you picked good music and sound effects throughout. Work on the drawings though, that's what makes this not so interesting.

[First Letter Last Letter]

(title in work)

I found this quite entertaining. It made no sense, and the words used were quite interesting, which I guess equals entertainment. So anyway, I thought you did a good job on this. As you said, animations and drawings weren't amazing, but you did a good enough job for me.

Aqlex responds:

Nice, I'm happy you were entertained! I promise to be making (and I have already made) more interesting animations with actual stories going on. Thanks for the review!

[My Dream]

(title in work)

Very good movie, my friend. The graphics definitely made this what it is. Excellent job on color contrast and shading. The animations were very advanced as well. Also a good storyline, though. You definitely have something going here, can't wait to see the next episode. I'm sure it won't disappoint.

[Werehog Attack]

(title in work)

Keep working on it, man. The animations weren't terrible, I've definitely seen worse, but with some practice you'll get better. My first tip would be to have a background. Also you need to zoom in on your scenes a bit. This was a very wide view, and everything was very small, which isn't good.

ry64 responds:

Thanks.