FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hitman Reborn part1]

(title in work)

Not all that bad for your first sprite movie ever. The animations were fair, but you need to keep your characters a little more steady. It didn't look like you were using tweens here, which is a problem. You could have also used some sound to juice this up a bit. Every movie should have at least some sound.

musbah responds:

that s true,i m planing to fix this part and add it to the part i m working on with some sound and all then i ll upload the full movie oh and i am using tweens.

[Boogerman]

(title in work)

Ehh...I can't say I really enjoyed this too much. The storyline really didn't have anything to it. Just random event followed by random event. The animation was pretty good, and it resembled the original game fairly well. Voice acting was above average as well. Overall well made, but the storyline is just lacking.

[HH - Assassination Pt. 1]

(title in work)

Well it promises what the title says. One assassination and another is about to happen in the next episode. This seemed a little bit rushed to me. You should have had some speakonia in here, reading text is a bit boring. Could have definitely been longer, but I will still watch the next episode.

[Tickles the Cactus]

(title in work)

Hahaha, what the hell is even going on here? The title originally drew me to watch this...a nice name for a cactus. A cactus with a giant penis. The music sounded like someone took a kid's piano and hit some random buttons. Overall, the storyline made no sense whatsoever, especially once those dancing smiley faces came in. But for some reason I find it necessary to add this to my favorites.

a-K47 responds:

You understood this flash perfectly!
Hope it made you happy

[Clam Confessions Vol. 1]

(title in work)

This was somewhat entertaining. I found that I had to turn up the volume in order to hear the voices...turn them up next time. But I did like the echo effect of the voices, that was a nice touch. Storyline was alright...I think it needs some more humor in it. Though I am interested to see how a clam will help this guy with the ladies in the next episode.

TheTrueTombo responds:

mmmm your absolutely right, we recorded it using the mic from Rock Band, so the quality isn't the best. Also we did this really quickly, the whole point of the animation was we wanted to do something REALLY quickly, and we are simply using Newgrounds to see if people would be interested in seeing more.

You comment definitly hammers that point home.

So far we have a pretty good idea where this is going to go, and if you keep watching, you might learn a thing or too :)

[You Can Only Dream]

(title in work)

This was very good. I really enjoy how you put so many small details into the graphics to make this look as good as possible. The hard work definitely shows in this movie. The sound effects and music you added fit the mood well throughout. If I had to give one thing that needs improving it would have to be the animations. Animating people moving is very tough, but that's all you need to work on here.

[Once Upon a What?!]

(title in work)

Heh, this was pretty funny, especially the Judge Judy appearance at the end. Did you plan this out at all or was the song done on the spot? Either way, it was quite random, but well song also. The graphics were pretty nice as well. The off white color made it much better than just pure white.

[Soup And Grey]

(title in work)

Good God, YoYoClock, you are one of my favorites ever man. You never disappoint. An awesome clock movie as always, you should release some more stuff. I thought the bed scene was pretty funny, clocks in bed...what could be unfunny about that?

YoYoClock responds:

freak. thanks though

[Mount Leadbo]

(title in work)

Well it was mildly entertaining. It shows you've got pretty good skill in drawing/animating, so let's see this skill put to some more interesting work, eh? I would suggest also getting a better microphone, this one didn't do your voice and justice while you were singing.