FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[World Of The Line: Snake]

(title in work)

In this day and age, FBF animations have to be a bit better than this to get anywhere. There definitely needs to be more going on in this one. For the most part, it's just one line at a time animating around the screen. I did like you calm choice of music and the background was pretty neat as well.

GlueyMcGee responds:

it's just another style

[Blood and Thunder]

(title in work)

Eh, not really impressed here. You didn't do much animating, just put some clips from a comic someone else made. The voice acting wasn't great, sometimes the quality was low as well. I don't think you really did anything much to make this more interesting than just looking at the comic.

[The Upset]

(title in work)

Not a fan of whatever sport or team these guys are talking about, so I guess that kind of lost my interest a bit. Regardless, I think you did a fair job animating this. You definitely captured the men's excitement in the animations.

DiagnosticHour responds:

Thanks for the nice review. I think the audio saved the animation a bit because no offense to whoever made this, but it looks like shit.

[Kool-Aid Chrstmas Trailer]

(title in work)

Nice...it was definitely done in a style similar to that of a real movie trailer, even if it was just for fun. You did a fine job adding in some humor to this in a short amount of time. The concept itself is quite entertaining. I would probably enjoy this if you made a full movie.

[World..]

(title in work)

Well, I guess what is contained in this movie is of good quality. Nice drawings and coloring. The shading looked like you have some experience in animating. A bit short for my tastes though, especially considering there was really no storyline in this movie.

Bigster responds:

:L Thanks For The Compliment..

Tbh it Wernt ment to be a Movie i didn't even know this was even going to pass..

[SovietBerry's rage]

(title in work)

Awesome. Great to see some people are still making these clock movies. Leek Clock saved the day, what else is new, eh? Animations weren't bad, but you should work on adding a bit more to your backgrounds. Also, what exactly happened when sovietberry climbed the ladder? I don't understand why this fight ensued.

[Too random]

(title in work)

Ok, this wasn't bad, and can be much better with some easy improvements. The main thing would be to make your lines more singular so that it looks like they are growing, rather than you just adding segments on. It would make it look much more fluid. Also, try to change the speed of your animating at some points, makes it more interesting. Nice musical choice for this movie.

[Reflex Fight]

(title in work)

It's not too bad at all. I liked some of the lighting effects you used in this to make it a bit more interesting. The animations weren't bad at all. I think your score would be a lot higher if you put some more time into this and made it longer. The storyline in this is just way too linear and ordinary.