FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Marsh-Mellow-Madness]

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^^Good Points^^
I liked the music, and this also had its share of humor. The ending was quite unexpected, though why did I expect someone to live in a Madness short?

^^Needs Improving^^
Just not really my style of madness. It's a bit boring and the ending wasn't very satisfying. Just didn't really have fun watching it.

[Madness Apotheosis]

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I've never actually watched an official Madness movie, as I thought all the fan-made episodes were complete crap. This wasn't too bad though. There was excellent animation and art throughout, with very realistic blood. Lots of chaos and carnage...to each his own. It wasn't quite as good as I thought it would be, with all the hype about it, but still nonetheless a true classic.

[Luigi Nr.1]

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This could use a whole lot of improvement. The first thing that I noticed, and the reason that I voted to delete this, was the size of the sprites. You put tiny characters against huge backgrounds, which just makes it look like it was done by a child. This got pretty darn boring after a while, seeing how Luigi just pulls out a gun on every single character and kills them. You need to get a little bit more creative with this.

[Making the Band part 1]

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Meh, it really wasn't that impressive. The graphics were pretty cheap. Triangle characters didn't look that good. The jokes weren't very funny, which didn't help this out. I felt like I had to wait a while to get a laugh out of this, and even then it really wasn't that funny. Needs more jokes squeezed in between the main ones. Good luck.

[eggs and you]

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^^Good Points^^
Interesting, nonetheless. I liked the improvised lyrics, they were quite funny...eggs talking about doom...

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought this was going to be more of PSA type thing with the way the title was..."eggs and you". However, I was disappointed when I just saw it was some eggs lip synced to some music.

[HP: the Alternate Ending]

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^^Good Points^^
I've never read Harry Potter, but I still think this wasn't too bad. Graphics were simple, but still looked detailed. Interesting twists in this as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short. I think you could have done a bit more to accommodate people who know nothing about HP, like me.

[No Touchy]

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^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty good movie, which I voted to protect. The graphics are very clean. Nice camera movement and shading in this. I liked the dream scene with the guy finding diamonds in the box. The ending was pretty cool, as it was kind of unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing really major I can say. The file size seems a bit big for the length of this. It was less than 30 seconds, so you could probably get the filesize down.

[A Random Slice of Pie]

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^^Good Points^^
Not really my style of movies, but it wasn't that bad. Some parts of this you had decent animations, and your random ideas were funny most of the time. It was entertaining to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing that bugged me was the sound quality. Anything that went through your microphone was just terrible and very hard on the ears. Even sound effects that I don't think you made were low quality.