FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My First Movie SE]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it was kind of humorous that you put in the old loony tunes theme at the end.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have no idea how this passed judgement, or even how it has a score of 1.01 right now, since this is a real bad movie. The drawings could be done by anyone with half of a brain and the music loops, which makes it way off sync the second and third times around. I don't think you put much time into this, so I can't give it a very good score.

[Yogi VS Snagglepuss]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, this is a pretty terrible movie, and I really can't think of anything to say here, except that the filesize is very low, so it took very little time to load.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are really horrible. They consist of a few shapes and lots of ugly gradients. There is very little animation and when there is, it is slow and not smooth at all. The storyline is really not interesting at all or very funny, so I didn't like this movie.

[GG-Karate Collaboration]

K

^^Good Points^^
Contrary to what the votes say, I think this is one of the better GG collabs. I found that each part of this collab was funny in its own way. I like Golden's part and Dynamites part best, except for that horrid noise at the end. Not a bad collab.

^^Needs Improving^^
I found that after Dynamite's part you go back to the preloader screen instead of the menu. Also, these look like they didn't take much time to make :(

[GJC Wars-Episode 1 V.3]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it's easy to say that even though this is a pretty terrible movie, it is still hundreds of times better than the first episode, mainly in terms of graphics. In this one you actually used flash and actually did some animating. Some of the voice overs were good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is still quite bad. The storyline is a snoozer, I had no idea what was going on and didn't have much desire to find out. The animaions are pretty lame, I can tell you don't know much anything technical about Flash.

[GG - 11/25: InhalerGlock2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how you added a menu button in each part. This is essential in every submission like this one. I thought epic gug adventure was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Other than what I mentioned above, everything in this piece of work isn't very interesting. Most of this was just flashing lights and quickly reflected images, which doesn't take much effort to make.

[F Meets StrawberryClock]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I thought the sound clip at the beginning was pretty funny. Kind of random, but pretty good taste atleast.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are pretty bad, I don't see what happened at the end with F growing all these spikey things out of his limbs. It took a few times for me to understand the clip that plays. This is kind of lame. There isn't much animation or storyline. Kind of a lack luster effort.

[a tribute to st3ph3n]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the description was funny. You made this sound like the good kind of tribute, but then the description was a complete turn around.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is really quite poorly made. Your graphics contain text, one image, and one stick figure that you drew. There is hardly any animating, except for the text, which looks pretty un smooth. There was no music or sound effects, which this needs. Not very good.

[Osama Dance]

K

^^Good Points^^
Music is ok. Just ok though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you put osamas head on top of an animated gif you stole, then added some random images of people/animals and cut and pasted them to animate them. No storyline, not funny, really quite bad. :(

[The Sun Glock Series Pt.1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Nice menu, which you didn't make. Too bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Something like this really needs menu buttons. Each scene is really quite boring and not fun to watch, so I would like to just skip each one by going back to the menu and then viewing the next. However, I find that after suffering through each part, no particular part was very good. The animation are shoddy and repetitive, and the songs are boring and overall, everything in this is boring.