FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ieeee Potato!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad in the graphics department. The drawings were pretty good. I liked the voice overs as well, they were pretty varying and well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really funny at all. I don't see what you found so great about this experience you had that you made it into a flash movie. There really aren't any animations and like I've said, the storyline is just killing this movie's score.

[Clock Tales: Ep 10]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, you won daily third place, that is great. The storyline is pretty funny. I liked the different speakonia tones used, and the many different characters are fun.

^^Needs Improving^^
This starts out kind of slow, which was very boring. Also there isn't a whole lot of animation in this, and the drawings weren't amazing either.

[My First Movie SE]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it was kind of humorous that you put in the old loony tunes theme at the end.

^^Needs Improving^^
I have no idea how this passed judgement, or even how it has a score of 1.01 right now, since this is a real bad movie. The drawings could be done by anyone with half of a brain and the music loops, which makes it way off sync the second and third times around. I don't think you put much time into this, so I can't give it a very good score.

[Yogi VS Snagglepuss]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, this is a pretty terrible movie, and I really can't think of anything to say here, except that the filesize is very low, so it took very little time to load.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are really horrible. They consist of a few shapes and lots of ugly gradients. There is very little animation and when there is, it is slow and not smooth at all. The storyline is really not interesting at all or very funny, so I didn't like this movie.

[GG-Karate Collaboration]

K

^^Good Points^^
Contrary to what the votes say, I think this is one of the better GG collabs. I found that each part of this collab was funny in its own way. I like Golden's part and Dynamites part best, except for that horrid noise at the end. Not a bad collab.

^^Needs Improving^^
I found that after Dynamite's part you go back to the preloader screen instead of the menu. Also, these look like they didn't take much time to make :(

[GJC Wars-Episode 1 V.3]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it's easy to say that even though this is a pretty terrible movie, it is still hundreds of times better than the first episode, mainly in terms of graphics. In this one you actually used flash and actually did some animating. Some of the voice overs were good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is still quite bad. The storyline is a snoozer, I had no idea what was going on and didn't have much desire to find out. The animaions are pretty lame, I can tell you don't know much anything technical about Flash.

[GG - 11/25: InhalerGlock2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how you added a menu button in each part. This is essential in every submission like this one. I thought epic gug adventure was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Other than what I mentioned above, everything in this piece of work isn't very interesting. Most of this was just flashing lights and quickly reflected images, which doesn't take much effort to make.

[Jack Doleman.com]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I'll say that the music is the best part of this movie, but even that gets a little bit annoying after a short while.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I think it's been said many times already in a vast amount of abusive reviews that this movie is just stupid. The animation is pretty lame, and the way you cut and pasted everything just looks crappy. I don't know who this Jack Doleman is, but I really don't care for your flash making fun of him or the reason behind it.