FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OrangeClock-Go-Round]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was pretty cool. I also think this isn't a bad idea to have a clock movie like this...with a regular video clip edited.

^^Needs Improving^^
It would have been an even better idea had this actually been a movie with a storyline and length to it. All you did was move an orage around a plate. You should definitely try something longer with a bit more storyline. It also doesn't really make sense how you animated him either. His face just disappears in one part.

PatriotClock responds:

why does everyone do

The Good

The Bad

now? Is that the hip thing to do?

[the porn deliverer's]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, good joke in this one. It was original at the time and it's kind of funny just how crappy this looks.

^^Needs Improving^^
This really isn't that great. The text is really hard to read, and there is no sound. The drawings look like crap, like I said above, and this doesn't look very convicing at all. If it looked convincing, this would be a lot better.

[Stupid Kid with Acnesss!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok this is kind of wierd. The graphics were pretty well done. Drawings were detailed and shading was nice. This was mildly funny at times too, and it gave me a laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, Happy Glock Day? Wow, sorry, but I didn't even realize it was Glock Day on the 18th. Anyway, this was really too random for me and didn't make much sense to me either.

[Character Motion Tutorial]

K

^^Good Points^^
The thing I liked most about this is how you wrote in a very easy to understand manner and a very casual manner as well, and still gave lots of information...good information at that. I also liked how you started out with making something look crappy, then making it progressively better. The music was very calming and a nice tune. Good job on this tutorial...it is quite useful!

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you should have divided this into section so that one can go directly to jumping or any other section if they want to.

Catjuggler responds:

Thank you for giving me tips! I always enjoy thoughtful and helpful reviews, wether they say my work is good or bad.

[Walkin' Me Dog]

K

^^Good Points^^
I find it impressive that you used your own, original music, instead of some overused paragonx9 song from the Audio Portal. Some parts of this were cute and kind of humorous as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm not sure what the heck is wrong with the graphics, but they look really odd and low quality. Your drawings aren't that detailed, and animations are pretty primitive.

[Phoenix Wrong Rides Again]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very nice sprite manipulation in this movie. Lots of the scenes were quite humorous and were pretty original and fun to watch. I honestly am likeing this stuff that you are putting out. It's quick, funny, and looks nice too. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you should make some longer ones with more scenes instead of just making new submissions, but whatever.

AshfordPride responds:

The next one will be MUCH longer. These last too ones were me just tinkering around with flash in my spare time. I wanted to see if people would like the idea before commiting to a longer version.

[AK]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, the graphics aren't bad. I liked how you mixed in real photos with your own drawings. The animations are pretty smooth and the sound effects are right on.

^^Needs Improving^^
There really isn't a great storyline in here, or one that develops at all. This really needs to be a lot longer and needs some content to be added to it. This is quite boring.

[Ieeee Potato!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not too bad in the graphics department. The drawings were pretty good. I liked the voice overs as well, they were pretty varying and well done.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really funny at all. I don't see what you found so great about this experience you had that you made it into a flash movie. There really aren't any animations and like I've said, the storyline is just killing this movie's score.