FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pube Grover Chronicles]

K

^^Good Points^^
I don't think we see enough of the pubes anymore, and it's good to see something made with pube Grover. I thought it was pretty funny how he turned into Darth Vader, and the other guy into Optimus prime. I was a little disappointed that there was no fight scene, but "Insert Cartridge" was just as good.

^^Needs Improving^^
These pubes are supposed to say disgusting things, however yours did almost none at all. :(

Rabid-Tux responds:

I will improve on the points you made. I will also eventually get around to the fight scene. Good day sir!

[Dad's at Work]

K

^^Good Points^^
Wow, wasn't expecting a sequel to Dad's Home, but this was a pleasant surprise. It's obvious that your animation skill has improved much over the years. You've incorporated much more three dimensional animation into this, which really makes this more interesting. Great job on keeping it just as crazy as the last episode.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, his head caught on fire, but he didn't put it out with a cat :(

[Link's Adventures]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I always like the song. This definitely isn't the best animations I've seen to it, but at least you put some effort into it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too much blank space. You should have filled up blank spaces with backgrounds more or made things bigger. Overall, just an average animation to this song, which kind of disappointed me.

[Obstifight]

K

^^Good Points^^
As far as the graphics, this was pretty good. Animations were very smooth and professional. The speedy part towards the end was pretty cool. Also liked the constant camera movement; I think it added to the chaos.

^^Needs Improving^^
The fight scenes were way too fast. They were hardly fight scenes at all. This was mostly just the guy running around in these tunnels. You should have definitely made some longer engagements.

Eleczero responds:

=) k ill try to fix those bugs

[I stole Mother Brain]

K

^^Good Points^^
I originally liked this because of the initial graphical style and also the same song as the leekspin website. The combination made me smile.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not much to back it up as far as a storyline. Just a loop with kind of annoying sound effects, and not even a real good conclusion to it. I think you may have some skill, just need to do a bit more with it.

[Skull Man]

K

^^Good Points^^
Sure, the graphics were pretty good. Nice animations and a decent job on accomplishing a short movie to test out your animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really needs a lot more added to it. You have all of these movie controls at the top, but what need for a ten second movie? You need to make this longer and more interesting, with some sort of storyline. You seem to have decent skills in animating, so give it a longer try.

[PALADIN episode 5 part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Another amazing addition to the series, and well worth the very long wait since the last episode. As always, a top notch release by you. The graphics were very impressive. The camera movements were very professional, and it didn't compromise the detail at all. Very believable voice acting and and enticing storyline. Excellent movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Can't say much here. Well worth the wait, and nothing I can say to improve upon this.

[Santa Claus HotLine]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really the only redeeming quality of this movie was the sound clip that you added to it. It was a pretty funny clip to listen to. I've never heard it before.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings and animations didn't do you much good. You used the same repeated animations over and over, and they didn't even look that good. Definitely need to work on the graphics a lot more.

[Royal Fighting]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was a pretty funny fight movie. I liked the tree usage in the beginning of this, that was funny. Overall, even though it's old it's a lot better than most random fight scenes.

^^Needs Improving^^
Could definitely use a zoom in. Most of the screen was completely unused, and having this so far away just made it seem, well distant!

[Cat-O-Blue 8]

K

^^Good Points^^
Benny Hill scenes always make me laugh a bit. This scene was pretty well done, and unexpected, as the can of food chasing the cat was pretty random. I liked the syncing to the music with the zooming in parts too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics weren't too impressive. You should have used some shading or something to make things more interesting. Also, animations were just tweens.