FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien Misunderstanding]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it looks like you atleast put some effort into making this and were serious about making it. Unfortunately, it didn't turn out too well.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, the animations are too slow. Increase the framerate and use tweening instead of just moving things FBF. Drawings also weren't too detailed and are pretty primitive. You should add some sound effects, atleast, maybe voice overs would be good. I don't really see what the "misunderstanding" was. Not really a great storyline.

[DailyToon12302004]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some decent drawings in auberdine's part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this is a really horrible daily toon. I'm pretty glad that these died out. I can now see where the Barney Bunch get's their style of voice overs and such from people like coolboyman. No part in this collab had any value of entertainment or any humor in it, in my opinion. This was boring and not fun to watch :'(

[Bubble Love]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings weren't that bad at all. Usually TotW submissions have extremely poor drawings, but this wasn't half bad. The ending was mildly funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not having sound is really annoying. Also, the storyline isn't really great. What is that guy? A bar of soap or something? Add some sound, a better storyline and maybe a bigger screen or something.

[Stupid Ride]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought that some of the drawings you made were pretty decent. I liked the buildings and trees you drew in the background. That part was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Everything else in this movie is far below par. For one thing. You gave the user a good thirty seconds to read a question mark in the beginning. I was about to exit the movie because I thought it was over. The storyline is a little lame and not very creative. This was also really short, though I'm not sure I would watch an extended version.

[Daily2oon09302005]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, what can I say, I'm a fan of j00bie's work. I liked the introduction and the menu as well. j0bie's part was the best in this, it was actually kind of humorous and made me laugh with the funny animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I don't like joabie's part, mainly because I don't like people who are a little conceited. Also, it didn't take much effort to make the animations, but I would know a lot about that.

[The truth of SBC]

K

^^Good Points^^
Looks like a pretty decent drawing, and you look like you know how to draw. You shaded pretty well and the shaping was nice as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's just a single frame with no animations. I'm not sure what you were trying to get across...maybe that orange is king of the portal and not SBC. But then why would he kill SBC? This just doesn't make sense.

[AntiClockClock Tribute]

K

^^Good Points^^
One thing I liked is the music. It's kind of funny putting in that "i'm a bitch" song to symbolize Anti-clock clock. That was pretty humorous. Also, the drawings was pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this is just a single frame, so of course I don't really like it. I don't think you put a whole lot of effort into making this single frame, and you didn't even take the time to optimize the music.