FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[dragonball P 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only reason I liked this somewhat was because it just made fun of DBZ, which is not a show I am a fan of. The voice overs were kind of funny, and the storyline was mildly entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are absolutely horrible. Your animations are very repetitive, like when the guy is flying through the sky, and you used undetailed single colored stick figures, which look like crap.

[bOrN tO bE dEaD]

K

^^Good Points^^
Umm...I really can't think of anything specific.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really didn't like this movie at all. First off, the random violence is not appealing at all and doesn't make any sense at all. The blood and gore was drawn poorly and was mostly just gradients. The animations were pretty poor and the sounds carried over into the next loop, which was annoying.

[Some shit]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok. I guess I could stretch it and say that the sound clips were mildly humorous.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics are terrible in all ways. Especially the drawings, since most of them were just simple shapes and very simple coloring. There is no clear storyline in this movie and the sound clips are not following any pattern other then they are all people saying something including the word "bitch".

[Princess Mononoke]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, music was a nice one. Good quality as well. The drawings and shadowing were pretty good as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, this is an extremely short movie, and nothing really exciting happens at all during the entire ten seconds it is playing. They just spin their heads around and that is the end. I don't really see a point in this movie.

[Alien Misunderstanding]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it looks like you atleast put some effort into making this and were serious about making it. Unfortunately, it didn't turn out too well.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, the animations are too slow. Increase the framerate and use tweening instead of just moving things FBF. Drawings also weren't too detailed and are pretty primitive. You should add some sound effects, atleast, maybe voice overs would be good. I don't really see what the "misunderstanding" was. Not really a great storyline.

[DailyToon12302004]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some decent drawings in auberdine's part.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this is a really horrible daily toon. I'm pretty glad that these died out. I can now see where the Barney Bunch get's their style of voice overs and such from people like coolboyman. No part in this collab had any value of entertainment or any humor in it, in my opinion. This was boring and not fun to watch :'(

[Bubble Love]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings weren't that bad at all. Usually TotW submissions have extremely poor drawings, but this wasn't half bad. The ending was mildly funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not having sound is really annoying. Also, the storyline isn't really great. What is that guy? A bar of soap or something? Add some sound, a better storyline and maybe a bigger screen or something.

[Stupid Ride]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought that some of the drawings you made were pretty decent. I liked the buildings and trees you drew in the background. That part was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Everything else in this movie is far below par. For one thing. You gave the user a good thirty seconds to read a question mark in the beginning. I was about to exit the movie because I thought it was over. The storyline is a little lame and not very creative. This was also really short, though I'm not sure I would watch an extended version.

[Daily2oon09302005]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, what can I say, I'm a fan of j00bie's work. I liked the introduction and the menu as well. j0bie's part was the best in this, it was actually kind of humorous and made me laugh with the funny animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I don't like joabie's part, mainly because I don't like people who are a little conceited. Also, it didn't take much effort to make the animations, but I would know a lot about that.