FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The truth of SBC]

K

^^Good Points^^
Looks like a pretty decent drawing, and you look like you know how to draw. You shaded pretty well and the shaping was nice as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's just a single frame with no animations. I'm not sure what you were trying to get across...maybe that orange is king of the portal and not SBC. But then why would he kill SBC? This just doesn't make sense.

[AntiClockClock Tribute]

K

^^Good Points^^
One thing I liked is the music. It's kind of funny putting in that "i'm a bitch" song to symbolize Anti-clock clock. That was pretty humorous. Also, the drawings was pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, this is just a single frame, so of course I don't really like it. I don't think you put a whole lot of effort into making this single frame, and you didn't even take the time to optimize the music.

[Teletobbies]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, I liked the music and voices you used. They are from the show so of course they work out well. I thought it was funny how you had different, generally negatively regarded symbols above each of their heads. That was pretty funny and was unexpected.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't do much animating, and when you did, it was really that great a job. When you animated them talking it was just opening their mouth, and you didn't really animate their arms and legs at all.

[Come to my party]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the song you had was pretty funny. Did you make it or someone else? It's really quite funny sounding. Your animations and drawings were pretty good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one thing, he was playing a guitar, which doesn't make a whole lot of sense, since the music is a piano. Of course I also don't like this since it is just a single frame animation with a few movie clips that loop over and over. I'm not sure I really want to come to your party...

[Parachute Happiness]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, the drawings and animations are decent. The music is also of good quality.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really find this too interesting. It's just some random violence, which doesn't appeal to me. This was really short and didn't have a great storyline or humor.

[Your X]

K

^^Good Points^^
The choice of music you made was pretty good. It fit well with the theme of this movie. The graphics were kind of creative, and you made a decent flash in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
You overused gradients for one. Try to shade more than use gradients. Also, this doesn't show much animations or much drawing skill. I guess if I had an X, I would have felt more towards this. It's just kind of bland.

[Sunshine Down Under]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, it's good to have you along in the SSC. I really liked this episode. it was funny how everything was upside down, and then when everything, even the little blue square fell to their deaths was great. Great, original drawings as always, and very original submission overall. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
You didn't really crop the cityscape too well. Sometimes I could see the sunshine behind it.

Omgee responds:

Yeah, I noticed the sun showing through on the cityscape after I spent about 45 minutes Photoshopping every last little detail of that frigging tower and crane. Decided to leave it alone, since I was kind of getting sick of Photoshop.

Just pretend that it's the sun reflecting off of the shiny bits! :)

Thanks for the great review and the warm welcome.