FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kitana+Mileena Fatality]

K

^^Good Points^^
I think it's a unique idea to make a movie out of a fatality, and having two characters doing a single fatality is also cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
If you are going to make a whole movie out of this, it needs to be a bit longer and more impressive. This was really short and didn't offer too much entertainment. The animation wasn't great, and the fatality's low intensity and gore doesn't deserve its own movie.

[The DOT OR NOT]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty good animations. Random FBF, but still not too badly done. I like how the stuff turned into words and other random objects.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just run of the mill, really nothing that was too interesting to me, as I've seen it done many times before. No syncing to music either, it's just there to fill emptiness.

[Bonic's Mega Bloopers]

K

^^Good Points^^
An interesting mix of both Sonic and Mario sprites and bloopers.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, the graphics were pretty poor. You need to slow down the animations a bit and raise the framerate a bit. Everything moved way too quickly. Also, you abused the Mario sound effects. Definitely needs something besides that, like background music or something.

[MASH]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess the music went well with united, proud mood you set here with the text. Text looked cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't understand this. MASH 4077...doesn't sound like a bunch that would say "we just want you dead" and overall it didn't make much sense at all to me.

[cheddar cheese! code red!]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was rather funny just because of how ridiculous it was. The jokes were odd, like Private Parts, and the flaming guy, not to mention the giant piece of cheddar, but I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely in need of some sound. Sound effects and voice overs would make this a whole lot better.

Robotcow responds:

we have a voice over one but i think htye were done poorly.....and yea it only tooke me a few hours to make this

[This Looks Like... v1.2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I liked the music, I think it fit well, and I guess the idea of this movie isn't all that bad, it was kind of interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't like the abrupt ending at all, I think it didn't fit well with this at all. I don't really know how to improve the fact that it wasn't more interesting, but that's one thing you need to work on.

[UCFD - AntiAntiClockClock]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess if you know what this is in reference to, which I do, it's a lot more funny than not. However, even if you don't know, the graphics are still very clean, and there's still some good jokes in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short for my tastes. Seemed a little anti-climatic to me, so it should have had a better ending.

[a war to please the gods]

K

^^Good Points^^
The art was really cool and had a unique style to it. The movie looked really nice, but still had quite a few shortfalls.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing I don't like about this was that it was way too short. You didn't develop the storyline at all, and really nothing was said to bring the viewer into the story. You just say it happened after some war, with nothing else. Overall, leaves me a little disappointed.

[Alex and the Home Colonic]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only part I found good about this was when the ghost popped out, that was unexpected and pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, this had a lot of problems. You needed more coloring in your drawings and definitely more detailed feces. This just looked odd and repetitive. It wasn't funny at all after a while for that reason.