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[Bonic's Mega Bloopers]

K

^^Good Points^^
An interesting mix of both Sonic and Mario sprites and bloopers.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, the graphics were pretty poor. You need to slow down the animations a bit and raise the framerate a bit. Everything moved way too quickly. Also, you abused the Mario sound effects. Definitely needs something besides that, like background music or something.

[MASH]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess the music went well with united, proud mood you set here with the text. Text looked cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't understand this. MASH 4077...doesn't sound like a bunch that would say "we just want you dead" and overall it didn't make much sense at all to me.

[cheddar cheese! code red!]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was rather funny just because of how ridiculous it was. The jokes were odd, like Private Parts, and the flaming guy, not to mention the giant piece of cheddar, but I liked it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely in need of some sound. Sound effects and voice overs would make this a whole lot better.

Robotcow responds:

we have a voice over one but i think htye were done poorly.....and yea it only tooke me a few hours to make this

[This Looks Like... v1.2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I liked the music, I think it fit well, and I guess the idea of this movie isn't all that bad, it was kind of interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't like the abrupt ending at all, I think it didn't fit well with this at all. I don't really know how to improve the fact that it wasn't more interesting, but that's one thing you need to work on.

[UCFD - AntiAntiClockClock]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess if you know what this is in reference to, which I do, it's a lot more funny than not. However, even if you don't know, the graphics are still very clean, and there's still some good jokes in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit short for my tastes. Seemed a little anti-climatic to me, so it should have had a better ending.

[a war to please the gods]

K

^^Good Points^^
The art was really cool and had a unique style to it. The movie looked really nice, but still had quite a few shortfalls.

^^Needs Improving^^
The main thing I don't like about this was that it was way too short. You didn't develop the storyline at all, and really nothing was said to bring the viewer into the story. You just say it happened after some war, with nothing else. Overall, leaves me a little disappointed.

[Alex and the Home Colonic]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only part I found good about this was when the ghost popped out, that was unexpected and pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Overall, this had a lot of problems. You needed more coloring in your drawings and definitely more detailed feces. This just looked odd and repetitive. It wasn't funny at all after a while for that reason.

[Ruxpin Prophecies]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, sometimes it was kind of funny. The jokes made no sense at all, but they were humorous at times.

^^Needs Improving^^
I'm pretty disappointed by this. The sound quality was really low and really annoying in some spots. The graphics were really poor, and a lot of this just wasn't that funny.

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[The Goop]

K

^^Good Points^^
It was kind of an interesting movie. The graphics were good, much better than most other DD movies. Nice character drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
I had no idea what was going on. I couldn't hear half of the stuff that Sage said, which really made it hard to find this entertaining as he said a lot of stuff relevant to the storyline.

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IZSBHR responds:

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- My bad ^^;-