FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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K

^^Good Points^^
Well, the music and sound effects were at least of good quality, though they could still be compressed quite a bit and still sound pretty much the same.

^^Needs Improving^^
Seriously, this was not good in the animation department. Nothing wrong with sticks, but you need to animate them a whole lot better. If this program you use has such limited capacity that this is what you produce, you should probably just remove it from your computer.

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Frenzy responds:

Then I can't make Flash!

Thanks for the review!

~ Z

[Goldfish #4]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very nice for a short movie. The graphics were very clean and had good shading and animations. The voice overs were cool too, definitely liked them. Pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not sure if I really liked the ending. I guess it was unexpected, but still a little odd.

[Summertime Suicide]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound effects, and the guy's crazy expression was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess it provided what it promised, but that wasn't really much and I thought it was going to be quite a bit more. This was extremely short, and really too short for me to enjoy it too much.

BlackPlastic responds:

Everything you said in ^^needs improving^^ was what made it so great :P

[Fruit Battle, It Ends Now]

K

^^Good Points^^
Interesting idea. I don't think its a CC ripoff at all, and it was kind of entertaining for its time. Interesting style of graphics and music.

^^Needs Improving^^
It does need some more length though. You ended this really abruptly, and I'm not really sure I would put "It ends now" in the title, as this was a very unsatisfying ending. Also, white space around edges looks awkward.

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[loving/feeling good swf1]

K

^^Good Points^^
I loved the music. This song is really not used in enough movies, and it was a really funny song. Liked the graphics as well, cool drawings.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought we weren't supposed to use cheap tween-humps. This definitely needed to have more in the animations and something more to introduce it.

[Brokeback Pokémon]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty sweet movie, and nice and short. I really liked the clip from the show that you used, and the way you animated and looped it made it look realistic in my eyes. Funny stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
It had no clocks in it, which I found most disappointing.

PirateClock responds:

it had a strawberry sitting in a tank!