FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cornholio!]

K

^^Good Points^^
I mostly like this movie for the sound clip you added. I haven't seen or heard that in a very long time, and it was funny to hear it once again. Some nice drawings too, looks like you had the characters down pretty well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations didn't follow the clip all that much though. It would have been a lot better if you had done some more relevant animations to the actual sound clip.

[DBZ End Of Everything]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty nice show of your graphical skills. It was a good drawing, and looked like who it was supposed to. I'm surprised by the detail and shading that you put into this.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's really short, and doesn't really have much of a storyline to it. Definitely leaves you hanging and wanting to see what this is actually about. Also, the "Enter" button at the end doesn't seem to work.

[Rebellion: The Escape]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was a pretty good movie. The storyline was very interesting, and you incorporated a lot of characters, which is unique. Nice music and overall good presentation.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations looked a bit deliberate and slow. You need to speed things up a bit in parts.

[the dancing man]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, that was pretty funny. Mostly because of the guys really random dancing. It was animated pretty comically, and I liked the style. Cow at the end was random too.

^^Needs Improving^^
A bit too short. I would have thought something more would have happened throughout this movie.

[Superbee]

K

^^Good Points^^
The storyline was pretty cool. It was a unique idea to have these bees plotting against the humans, and the ending of this was rather funny and unexpected. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Graphics could use the most improving. Some scenes just look like they were really quickly drawn to me.

[Magic Today]

K

^^Good Points^^
Step by step instructions to magic tricks? Sounds cool enough. The animations and introduction were pretty cool, and I liked the loop you chose for this.

^^Needs Improving^^
If I wanted to encourage you to make another, I would have to see something a bit less lame than this. I know you have to do stuff with everyday items, but still this was about the lamest magic trick I've ever seen.

[Technology]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought it was cool how you started this one out. You had a cool set of laws that set up the storyline kind of nicely. Pretty good animations and looked like a good start to a movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hardly finished though. It was interesting, but ended way too soon for my tastes. I think you should have definitely continued this in another episode or something.

[Chronicles of Chaos1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie. Your animations are very smooth, and if you didn't use tweens as you say, that's pretty impressive. Nice blood animations as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just random violence. No storyline other than don't mess with drunk drivers, which doesn't make much sense to me. Add a storyline and try to zoom into your scenes a bit more. Makes it more interesting.

iPWNd responds:

Hmm, I just turned 15 when I did this animation. I look back at it and I have some serious improvements and more of a logical out-look on animations than just pointless violence. I respect your review and score on this one, but for a more updated point of view of my animation skill look at a more recent one ;)

Chargin' mah razor