FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Technology]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought it was cool how you started this one out. You had a cool set of laws that set up the storyline kind of nicely. Pretty good animations and looked like a good start to a movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hardly finished though. It was interesting, but ended way too soon for my tastes. I think you should have definitely continued this in another episode or something.

[Chronicles of Chaos1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie. Your animations are very smooth, and if you didn't use tweens as you say, that's pretty impressive. Nice blood animations as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just random violence. No storyline other than don't mess with drunk drivers, which doesn't make much sense to me. Add a storyline and try to zoom into your scenes a bit more. Makes it more interesting.

iPWNd responds:

Hmm, I just turned 15 when I did this animation. I look back at it and I have some serious improvements and more of a logical out-look on animations than just pointless violence. I respect your review and score on this one, but for a more updated point of view of my animation skill look at a more recent one ;)

Chargin' mah razor

[ANT WARS (Pvw)]

K

^^Good Points^^
A pretty good preview. I would watch the full movie just because it had ants in it, and that seems interesting. The animations weren't too bad either.

^^Needs Improving^^
Work on drawings and shading a bit. This could definitely use some shading in it, or perhaps some tasteful gradients.

[LKJH]

K

^^Good Points^^
Gave me a laugh. I didn't watch the first two, so I thought this was actually going to be good. The intro was rather funny how you led into this saying "this is no such movie".

^^Needs Improving^^
You need more going on in the seizure scene. There is just one guy spinning around. Hardly enough to give a seizure hardened veteran like me a good seizure.

[Cheating Whore]

K

^^Good Points^^
That was an interesting movie. You had a good amount of Mario fighting in there, and the Bowser's demise was rather cool. Also, don't really understand why he killed Peach, but whatever, it was interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
You need to work on the animations a bit. For some reason Mario looked too tall to me, like you stretched him out or something. Just make some smoother animations in your next one.

[The Best Flash Ever]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, it was kind of funny to start, and how long it went on. I thought some of the things you said, and who they were said by was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think you went a little far with this. It was funny up to a certain point, but after that it just got a little out of hand and not really funny anymore.

[Boldly Going Nowhere]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, a movie made completely by you, even the music. Very cool and a very commendable effort on your part. It made me smile to watch this. Pretty good drawings and the lyrics were funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
In parts the song sounded a bit disjointed, as if you messed up in parts or were just improvising or something. Maybe just some more practice before you actually record.

Review Request Club

Timsplosion responds:

Yeh, thanks. This one is 100% made by me, and I don't know about anyone else but I feel this is one of my best flash works to date graphics wise. But unfortunatley that's not reflected in the score. :P Well, the song may have been a bit undercooked, but it still did the job I wanted it to.

[Subtle+Dynamic]

K

^^Good Points^^
You definitely got me interested. Hot purple chicks laying naked on tree branches. I can't see what can make a better movie. Very smooth and life-like animation, with cool music to go along with it.

^^Needs Improving^^
I would like to see a full length movie from you. This was entertaining, but still you could make pretty good movies if you applied yourself.

Review Request Club

NionKokesu responds:

Thank you very much for the review! School, unfortunately, doesn't tend to give enough time to make assignments very long until you get the senior classes. I'll be uploading another (short) project soon and I'm working on a longer one, but I've put it on hold because I've got a job doing Flash stuff for a pretty big company, so my own stuff gets put on the back burner for now.

Once again, thank you very much for your review! I hope you view and enjoy my work in the future.