FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Battlefield 2 Intro]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music fit the movie pretty well.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was hardly a Flash movie. You basically just recorded (or stole) footage from the game and put it into Flash with some text added in between clips. The quality of the clips wasn't even that good. Nothing exciting or funny happened, and basically it was just clips put together. Not entertaining at all.

[Forbidden Movies]

K

^^Good Points^^
The voice acting wasn't too bad. You had a clear voice that varied from character to character, and parts of this were mildly funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were very disappointing. For the most part, you just had traced images, which looks good, but the effort behind it is minimal.

[Clay Creator]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought that the voice acting was decent. It was clear and sometimes kind of humorous.

^^Needs Improving^^
The quality in the graphics was really low. You should have gotten a better camera or something. Also, should have made some scenery or something. It looks stupid with a chair in the background. Characters seemed oddly familiar....

[MegaManX: Gas Man]

K

^^Good Points^^
A nice little short here, with a good amount of humor packed in. Though I knew it was coming, I couldn't help but laugh at the gaseous boss at the end of this stage. Having his farts completely obliterate MegaMan was a bit unexpected though.

^^Needs Improving^^
It was a bit hard to read the text in the beginning against the background.

[shotgun mayham]

K

^^Good Points^^
I'm at least glad that it was short.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was pretty bad. The graphics were very poor. Your animations were very slow and the framerate was slow, making them look not so smooth. There was absolutely no storyline either, just a guy shooting whoever he encounters. Including a green ball, which makes no sense at all. Definitely add a storyline to any movie you make in the future.

[Short funny stick movie]

K

^^Good Points^^
Decent animating and addition of sound effects in this movie. They made this a lot more interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, "Short funny stick movie" as a title is just asking for trouble. I expected nothing from this movie when I read that, and that's basically what I got. A plain white background, and the same joke used over and over doesn't add up to a really great movie.

[Dooba: pilot]

K

^^Good Points^^
I guess you could say the animations are clean at least. May look good to someone who's never seen Flash before.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just the style of this movie was so awful. The whole first scene is just him waving and shit, which is the lamest way I know for anyone to show off their animating skills. The rest of this was just boring. I was so bored by it I didn't even notice the black guy that everyone's fussing about.

[Three Deadly Sins]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, decent drawings. You at least had some background drawings in this. Also, decent job on drawing the blood and stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
First, loading screen is displayed until you right click and hit play. The movie itself is just random violence that wasn't really funny or even entertaining. This was boring and just in bad taste.

[Die Mario, Die 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
You didn't do too bad of a job on the graphics in this. The animation was half decent at least. Some good sound as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely should have zoomed in a bit on this one, it was way too far away, which just makes it feel distant. The storyline wasn't that great. It was kind of original, but it wasn't funny at all.