FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Half Life - #2]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well I think it was better than the first episode by quite a bit. You actually drew a character that looks like Gordon Freeman, which makes the movie seem more interesting to me. Better jokes and longer than the last. Much better.

^^Needs Improving^^
Still the main thing would be the animations. Yours are pretty poorly done. I think you definitely need some more animating practice.

[My Half Life - #1]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I guess you could say that there was a good amount of detail in the drawings. The enemy guy looked pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is really quite poorly made though. The animations were pretty lack luster, and the jokes just weren't very funny. I definitely hope that your next few episodes are better than this one.

[The Dimension]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not bad at all. I'm not at all a fan of claymation, but nonetheless, there is no doubt that this was pretty well done. Your animations are very well done. You've obviously spent a lot of time making this and making sure everything was smooth. Neat storyline as well. Hope to see more from you in the future!

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing that really stands out as needing improving would be the image quality. I don't know if it was your camera or Flash that did it, but I would have liked to see some higher quality images.

monkeyontherun12 responds:

(response to needs improving) yeah dude it was flash! i was so disspapointed. the video quality was a WHOLE lot better before i put it on flash. if there is any way you know how to fix this, please help me.

[Above the Influence1945]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A funny concept here of moving these ads to the 1940's. I think you did a good job of making this humorous and interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you used a lot of pictures in this. Drawing out your scenes in Flash is always a better idea then just drawing over images. Even tracing would be good, but keeping work consistent throughout a movie looks much better.

blutorse4792 responds:

Only reason I do that is because I like the way it looks ;p

Thanks for the comments.

[A piece of puke]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Follows in the randomness of "shared joy is double joy", which is something hard to live up to. You've got the same very smooth FBF animations in this with the same random ideas in the movie. Definitely interesting sound effects and music to spice this up a bit as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just a bit short if you ask me. Also, it doesn't really have that random "funny" to it that your other random short had. Still, great job!

[Pot Head Bob and a gennie]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well I guess it's nice to make something you are obviously interested in...

^^Needs Improving^^
The whole drug related storyline really didn't appeal to me. I didn't find it interesting or funny whatsoever. The audio was pretty poor. Volumes varied throughout, which made it annoying to listen to it. Graphics were pretty poor as well. Seemed like a kind of rip off of the canadians on South Park, which I never liked the look of.

D3m0n1c707 responds:

Thanks
btw i felt the south park canadian look was good becaue i am canadian
i will try to improve the audio and also to tell u the truth i am not a pot head i felt it would apeal as somthin that was humorous to others
also the graphics were not supposed to be amazing i made them basc and simple so they ould be easy on the eye

[The Fairy Future Mother]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well done! I was quite surprised by this one, because looking at it, it seemed to have really crappy graphics at first, but you showed a lot of skill graphically. The animations were pretty smooth and the detail in the drawings was refreshing. A funny character and a funny storyline. Nice movie!

^^Needs Improving^^
Just work on the animations more. Sometimes they still look a little strange, but still good overall. This was very good.

[CandyHolics]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
This movie was quite funny. Definitely something that I enjoyed watching all the way through. The characters are well defined, and they all have their funny traits to them. The voice acting was very good, and I thought the movie was quite funny overall.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations are a bit lacking if you ask me. You don't really animate a whole lot at all. The hands and arms just move instantaneously, which looks kind of weird.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, for the review.