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[The Gameboy's Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
I really don't see how this got turd of the week. It must have been a pretty good week for this to get turd! The storyline was pretty funny and quite random, but I had a good laugh watching this movie. The music was a groovy tune, and nice job making this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics are the weakest point in this movie. You didn't animated a whole lot, and sometimes the drawings remained in parts. Towards the end there is green from the joint on the gameboy, which makes this look a little rushed.

Fabulousfaice responds:

Wow, thank you for an actual constructive review! I've been thinking of making the second episode on this one, with another random storyline, and by the way: That ending was rushed :( I was just trying to get it done and get it into the flash portal, you know? I should spend more time, I know.

Thank you for, most importantly, not being a dick :D Much <3, man.

[Power Shutdown]

K

^^Good Points^^
I have no idea at all why this movie has such a low score. It is really quite entertaining and I liked watching it a lot. The voice overs were delightful, the storyline is really quite humorous, and the added Benny Hill scene at the end is just hilarious. I don't know why this has such a low score, but it is pure gold!

^^Needs Improving^^
The first scene could use some graphical improvement, but other than that this is pretty darn tight.

["Meow" Surprise!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only reason I gave this any positive points were the graphics, not badly drawn for the most part. Also the introduction was rather creative and pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see the point of this. I watch a kitty get smashed by a club with a nail in it, then watch the poorly drawn blood animate all over the screen. Do I want to smash the kitty again? No, I didn't want to smash it once.

[The Many Deaths of Luigi]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how you gave a short description of each death before it happened.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's really annoying to see a movie with no music, and for a movie about Mario and Luigi, it is extremely easy to find good sound effects. Your images were really low quality, and the sprites weren't manipulated at all. Your drawings don't look good at all, and the animations are just atrocious. The deaths aren't particularly exciting or creative either. This is really quite bad.

[The History of Zelda]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. I guess that a zelda tune makes sense in a Zelda themed movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the information in this movie is really braod. You gave us some very basic information about the game, like the title, and the fact that Zelda was kidnapped. This information is nothing that cannot be found in any basic fansite, which there are many.

[Peanut Butter Jelly]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was delighted to find that atleast you didn't use that horrid song throughout the whole movie. That would just be terrible.

^^Needs Improving^^
The fact that you did use that incredibly annoying song at all bothers me. You can fix the audio syncing, which is pretty off by adding a preloader. This is really boring. That stupid banana plays the sax for about five minutes, which is when I exited this movie, and I honestly don't care what happened afterwards, I know it can't be too interesting.

[dragonball P 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only reason I liked this somewhat was because it just made fun of DBZ, which is not a show I am a fan of. The voice overs were kind of funny, and the storyline was mildly entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are absolutely horrible. Your animations are very repetitive, like when the guy is flying through the sky, and you used undetailed single colored stick figures, which look like crap.

[bOrN tO bE dEaD]

K

^^Good Points^^
Umm...I really can't think of anything specific.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really didn't like this movie at all. First off, the random violence is not appealing at all and doesn't make any sense at all. The blood and gore was drawn poorly and was mostly just gradients. The animations were pretty poor and the sounds carried over into the next loop, which was annoying.

[Some shit]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok. I guess I could stretch it and say that the sound clips were mildly humorous.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics are terrible in all ways. Especially the drawings, since most of them were just simple shapes and very simple coloring. There is no clear storyline in this movie and the sound clips are not following any pattern other then they are all people saying something including the word "bitch".