FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[xbox more than a system]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, not a bad idea at all. I thought this was pretty interesting and a pretty neat movie. The drawings were done pretty well, especially in the circuitboard you drew. Very nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
The reason I didn't give this a higher score is that it's really too short. Your main argument is "see?" instead of showing us some comical events that take place inside of an xbox. Add some more storyline and length to this and it will be a lot better.

[Retarmind]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music you put in here. Good stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really the animations are bad in this. Your drawings are made up mostly of cut and pastes from different sources and then animated really unprofessionally. This is really short and isn't funny at all. It's also not entertaining, and I wouldn't recommend people watch this movie.

[The Greatest Sport Ever!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Sorry, I can't in my right mind give this any points.

^^Needs Improving^^
What is this movie? A slideshow of pictures you didn't take and a song that you didn't create either. You did nothing with this movie besides steal some images and put them to some song that you didn't credit. I'm sorry. Do some work next time and maybe I will be able to give you some points.

[The Gameboy's Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
I really don't see how this got turd of the week. It must have been a pretty good week for this to get turd! The storyline was pretty funny and quite random, but I had a good laugh watching this movie. The music was a groovy tune, and nice job making this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics are the weakest point in this movie. You didn't animated a whole lot, and sometimes the drawings remained in parts. Towards the end there is green from the joint on the gameboy, which makes this look a little rushed.

Fabulousfaice responds:

Wow, thank you for an actual constructive review! I've been thinking of making the second episode on this one, with another random storyline, and by the way: That ending was rushed :( I was just trying to get it done and get it into the flash portal, you know? I should spend more time, I know.

Thank you for, most importantly, not being a dick :D Much <3, man.

[Power Shutdown]

K

^^Good Points^^
I have no idea at all why this movie has such a low score. It is really quite entertaining and I liked watching it a lot. The voice overs were delightful, the storyline is really quite humorous, and the added Benny Hill scene at the end is just hilarious. I don't know why this has such a low score, but it is pure gold!

^^Needs Improving^^
The first scene could use some graphical improvement, but other than that this is pretty darn tight.

["Meow" Surprise!]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only reason I gave this any positive points were the graphics, not badly drawn for the most part. Also the introduction was rather creative and pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see the point of this. I watch a kitty get smashed by a club with a nail in it, then watch the poorly drawn blood animate all over the screen. Do I want to smash the kitty again? No, I didn't want to smash it once.

[The Many Deaths of Luigi]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like how you gave a short description of each death before it happened.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's really annoying to see a movie with no music, and for a movie about Mario and Luigi, it is extremely easy to find good sound effects. Your images were really low quality, and the sprites weren't manipulated at all. Your drawings don't look good at all, and the animations are just atrocious. The deaths aren't particularly exciting or creative either. This is really quite bad.

[The History of Zelda]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. I guess that a zelda tune makes sense in a Zelda themed movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the information in this movie is really braod. You gave us some very basic information about the game, like the title, and the fact that Zelda was kidnapped. This information is nothing that cannot be found in any basic fansite, which there are many.

[Peanut Butter Jelly]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was delighted to find that atleast you didn't use that horrid song throughout the whole movie. That would just be terrible.

^^Needs Improving^^
The fact that you did use that incredibly annoying song at all bothers me. You can fix the audio syncing, which is pretty off by adding a preloader. This is really boring. That stupid banana plays the sax for about five minutes, which is when I exited this movie, and I honestly don't care what happened afterwards, I know it can't be too interesting.