FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[F Meets StrawberryClock]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I thought the sound clip at the beginning was pretty funny. Kind of random, but pretty good taste atleast.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are pretty bad, I don't see what happened at the end with F growing all these spikey things out of his limbs. It took a few times for me to understand the clip that plays. This is kind of lame. There isn't much animation or storyline. Kind of a lack luster effort.

[a tribute to st3ph3n]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the description was funny. You made this sound like the good kind of tribute, but then the description was a complete turn around.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is really quite poorly made. Your graphics contain text, one image, and one stick figure that you drew. There is hardly any animating, except for the text, which looks pretty un smooth. There was no music or sound effects, which this needs. Not very good.

[Osama Dance]

K

^^Good Points^^
Music is ok. Just ok though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, you put osamas head on top of an animated gif you stole, then added some random images of people/animals and cut and pasted them to animate them. No storyline, not funny, really quite bad. :(

[The Sun Glock Series Pt.1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Nice menu, which you didn't make. Too bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
Something like this really needs menu buttons. Each scene is really quite boring and not fun to watch, so I would like to just skip each one by going back to the menu and then viewing the next. However, I find that after suffering through each part, no particular part was very good. The animation are shoddy and repetitive, and the songs are boring and overall, everything in this is boring.

[Police stick up]

K

^^Good Points^^
Seriously, i've seen people just starting Flash much better than this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are terrible, so lets get that out of the way first. Your drawings are very crappy looking, and there are hardly any animations, and when there are, they look even worse. There is no music or sound effects, which are really easy to find and add. The storyline isn't very creative and doesn't have much humor or excitement in it.

[Jesus walks into a motel.]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings in this movie aren't that terrible. They could definitely be improved, but they are the best part in this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, this is not funny at all, nor does it really make sense to me at all. I'm not sure if you were making a joke during the flash, or the whole movie was supposed to be a joke. This is really quite bad. Your animating skills are quite lame and the voice acting isn't great either.