FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Police stick up]

K

^^Good Points^^
Seriously, i've seen people just starting Flash much better than this.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are terrible, so lets get that out of the way first. Your drawings are very crappy looking, and there are hardly any animations, and when there are, they look even worse. There is no music or sound effects, which are really easy to find and add. The storyline isn't very creative and doesn't have much humor or excitement in it.

[Jesus walks into a motel.]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings in this movie aren't that terrible. They could definitely be improved, but they are the best part in this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, this is not funny at all, nor does it really make sense to me at all. I'm not sure if you were making a joke during the flash, or the whole movie was supposed to be a joke. This is really quite bad. Your animating skills are quite lame and the voice acting isn't great either.

[xbox more than a system]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, not a bad idea at all. I thought this was pretty interesting and a pretty neat movie. The drawings were done pretty well, especially in the circuitboard you drew. Very nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
The reason I didn't give this a higher score is that it's really too short. Your main argument is "see?" instead of showing us some comical events that take place inside of an xbox. Add some more storyline and length to this and it will be a lot better.

[Retarmind]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music you put in here. Good stuff.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really the animations are bad in this. Your drawings are made up mostly of cut and pastes from different sources and then animated really unprofessionally. This is really short and isn't funny at all. It's also not entertaining, and I wouldn't recommend people watch this movie.

[The Greatest Sport Ever!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Sorry, I can't in my right mind give this any points.

^^Needs Improving^^
What is this movie? A slideshow of pictures you didn't take and a song that you didn't create either. You did nothing with this movie besides steal some images and put them to some song that you didn't credit. I'm sorry. Do some work next time and maybe I will be able to give you some points.

[The Gameboy's Story]

K

^^Good Points^^
I really don't see how this got turd of the week. It must have been a pretty good week for this to get turd! The storyline was pretty funny and quite random, but I had a good laugh watching this movie. The music was a groovy tune, and nice job making this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the graphics are the weakest point in this movie. You didn't animated a whole lot, and sometimes the drawings remained in parts. Towards the end there is green from the joint on the gameboy, which makes this look a little rushed.

Fabulousfaice responds:

Wow, thank you for an actual constructive review! I've been thinking of making the second episode on this one, with another random storyline, and by the way: That ending was rushed :( I was just trying to get it done and get it into the flash portal, you know? I should spend more time, I know.

Thank you for, most importantly, not being a dick :D Much <3, man.