FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Message About Drugs]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, atleast this had a good message in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is really quite a poor excuse for a movie. You simply googled some images, then tweened them down. It wouldn't have been so bad if everything wasn't so predictible. The last three senarios you had were so predictible and I knew what they were going to be before it even came up. No animation, not really funny and quite predictible.

[Gost Talk: TheMasterpiece]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was pretty good. The whole interview was rather humorous and kind of random, which made it fun. The speakonia was pretty funny and I found it hilarious when gost had a heart attack. Very funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really a whole lot of animating besides some rotations and stuff, which is kind of boring.

Starberry responds:

the masterpiece

[Slash Dot Com]

K

^^Good Points^^
Atleast the animations were synced to the music well.

^^Needs Improving^^
All that this movie contains is a picture of a slash, a dot, and the word com. Played over and over and over with a few small animations in between. If anything happened after that I didn't see because the beginning was too boring to keep my attention throughout the rest of it. Add some actual animations that are longer than half a second and this would be half decent.

[City Dealer]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not bad animation actually, like the subtle eye movements and the mouthing you did. Voice overs and music fit well too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really a good storyline at all. Just some guy buys drugs on the street and that is it. I was expecting something to actually happen in this movie that would be interesting. The drawings weren't great. You could have spent some more time on them.

[Dailytoon #239]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only good section of this daily toon was mademoiselle's part. It had good drawings and animations, and was unexpected as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Oh, no, you had to put in menu buttons, that means a bunch of short crappy loops, and of course that is what happened. Nazi Barney's part was just annoying, I'm not even sure why I clicked on it, seeing how he can't make anything right. Gotflash's two parts weren't funny either.

[BBQBeef Interview]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it's in the fashion of BBQ, so I like that. The speakonia was kind of funny, and this wasn't too bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
The speakonia, though it's funny, is very hard to hear. I couldn't make out what the people were saying at my normal volume level, and I really had to crank this up. Not really that original in the storyline department.

[Bbq-ish quest]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was pleasantly surprised not to find much scat humor in here, which seemed to be a growing trend in your movies. I liked the fat guy at the end, it was unexpected and quite funny. The voice overs were very funny too, so casual, yet so epic. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too bad you didn't really give this a very good ending. It was very open ended. Perhaps a sequel is in order?

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Perhaps.

[Old vs New Zelda]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the music throughout this movie. You had some good Zelda remixes that of course if the theme of the movie. Some of the jokes were kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were really terrible on this. Spend a lot more time on drawings. Your arrows were just crooked white lines, not even straight ones! The animations were pretty bad too. Dieing was basically just cutting a sprite in half. This doesn't really follow a great path either with the different events you have in this. Not really what I was expecting.

RyuXKen responds:

can u help me work on this?

[Genocide Inc. Episode 01]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok the storyline in this movie was pretty good. I like how you put in a bunch of pictures of certain stuff you were talking about, like the dead rat and the hand signals. Some of the music choices were good, basically everything aside from Jungle Boogie.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations in this movie were really quite boring. You used the same simple animations over and over again.

Blaklyon responds:

I agree with you in every area you point out but remember, I this was the first flash animation I ever did. If you watch my later works, you will see where I inproved on some stuff. I was thinking about redoing this animation with better sound and better graphics. Thanks for the review!

[Infantry End of the world]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was pretty good overall. Some scenes in this, pretty much everything after the missile launch sequence looked pretty good. I'm not sure whether you drew most of the stuff or if they are sprites, but either way, the graphics are pretty good in this. This movie gave a good feel for the game and what it was like, and overall was pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Before the missile launch sequence, everything was pretty poorly done. You had a lot of pretty poor drawings and poor sprite manipulation, and you used a lot of the same sound effects over and over again.