FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Random Clockday Short]

Hah

^^Good Points^^
A neat little short for clock day. i really liked the drawings because of how original they were. The script was funny, like "Your blender seems to have bested me" is a funny line. The storyline was rather funny, and the ending was just great.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like you kind of said already, the guys voice at the end is incredibly annoying.

johnfn responds:

Thanks. I'm glad my humor hit home with someone.

The voice acting was practically unavoidable since I had to go like an hour BEFORE I submited (ie, I had no spare time to make it good at all)

[Dailytoon #241]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how I am able to skip the long annoying intro, hooray for that. I thought that saigon's part was the best...so true. i liked the music and sound effects in each part too, especially the Captain Jack song, even though it sucks.

^^Needs Improving^^
Rummonkey's part was already submitted once by him, or atleast I think him in a separate submission. And when you hit the menu button from that game, I got the angry faic dude and the piclownjews frozen on the menu.

[A Message About Drugs]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, atleast this had a good message in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is really quite a poor excuse for a movie. You simply googled some images, then tweened them down. It wouldn't have been so bad if everything wasn't so predictible. The last three senarios you had were so predictible and I knew what they were going to be before it even came up. No animation, not really funny and quite predictible.

[Gost Talk: TheMasterpiece]

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought this was pretty good. The whole interview was rather humorous and kind of random, which made it fun. The speakonia was pretty funny and I found it hilarious when gost had a heart attack. Very funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really a whole lot of animating besides some rotations and stuff, which is kind of boring.

Starberry responds:

the masterpiece

[Slash Dot Com]

K

^^Good Points^^
Atleast the animations were synced to the music well.

^^Needs Improving^^
All that this movie contains is a picture of a slash, a dot, and the word com. Played over and over and over with a few small animations in between. If anything happened after that I didn't see because the beginning was too boring to keep my attention throughout the rest of it. Add some actual animations that are longer than half a second and this would be half decent.

[City Dealer]

K

^^Good Points^^
Not bad animation actually, like the subtle eye movements and the mouthing you did. Voice overs and music fit well too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not really a good storyline at all. Just some guy buys drugs on the street and that is it. I was expecting something to actually happen in this movie that would be interesting. The drawings weren't great. You could have spent some more time on them.

[Dailytoon #239]

K

^^Good Points^^
The only good section of this daily toon was mademoiselle's part. It had good drawings and animations, and was unexpected as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Oh, no, you had to put in menu buttons, that means a bunch of short crappy loops, and of course that is what happened. Nazi Barney's part was just annoying, I'm not even sure why I clicked on it, seeing how he can't make anything right. Gotflash's two parts weren't funny either.

[BBQBeef Interview]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, it's in the fashion of BBQ, so I like that. The speakonia was kind of funny, and this wasn't too bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
The speakonia, though it's funny, is very hard to hear. I couldn't make out what the people were saying at my normal volume level, and I really had to crank this up. Not really that original in the storyline department.

[Bbq-ish quest]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was pleasantly surprised not to find much scat humor in here, which seemed to be a growing trend in your movies. I liked the fat guy at the end, it was unexpected and quite funny. The voice overs were very funny too, so casual, yet so epic. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Too bad you didn't really give this a very good ending. It was very open ended. Perhaps a sequel is in order?

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

Perhaps.

[Old vs New Zelda]

K

^^Good Points^^
I like the music throughout this movie. You had some good Zelda remixes that of course if the theme of the movie. Some of the jokes were kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were really terrible on this. Spend a lot more time on drawings. Your arrows were just crooked white lines, not even straight ones! The animations were pretty bad too. Dieing was basically just cutting a sprite in half. This doesn't really follow a great path either with the different events you have in this. Not really what I was expecting.

RyuXKen responds:

can u help me work on this?