FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wisdom in a Can (CC)]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a good submission for Clock Day. The music was always good throughout, and it was constantly changing, as were the sound effects in this. I found it funny and unexpected throughout this movie, and the graphics were well done, especially the effects and camera views.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unlike you said, I thought the as this went on it got more boring, just because it didn't really stay on topic at all.

Review Request Club.

[Clock Day gets wierder]

K

^^Good Points^^
Some parts of this I found pretty funny, like "my minute hand isn't supposed to bend" was humorous, and the randomness in this was pretty funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Lots of gradients were used in this, and it got ugly after a while. Gradients are OK, but they can't be used a whole lot. There wasn't too much animation either besides some up and down MC's.

Review Request Club.

IZSBHR responds:

I used shadows, not gradients.

Animation:

Arrow

Mouth

Up & Down

Laser

Hidden clock guy

All three Eater eggs.

It was very random. Thanks for your review, it's highly appreciated.

[Blockhead: Quick Shot 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
I was really happy to see another Blockhead movie in the portal, since it has been a while since I've seen them. I'm glad to see that you really made this one much funnier than the past few episodes, which were starting to wane in comedy. I really liked the voice overs as always, and the animations were great. The drawings were very defined, and this was funny throughout. As always, excellent job.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I'm not sure I know what is going on, but whatever, I guess I don't visit the website enough to know.

The-Swain responds:

I was gonna recommend that people watch Time Squad first so that they know what's happening here, but a 30-minute film is not really an appropriate prologue for a 60-second short. :)

[June 6th 1944]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a good movie for clock day. It's based on a good movie, so of course it is going to be good. The animations were pretty smooth and this is definitely an original idea to have as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The clocks are all uniform, which is not very fun at all. Also, I realize there isn't much voicing, but what there is, I can't hear over the loud music.

[SBC plays pacman]

K

^^Good Points^^
Wow, this is thus far the best Clock Day movie I have seen so far. The graphics were just amazing. Your SBC is very original, and the amount of details you put into this was just very impressive, like the fingernails and all of the shading. The sound effects won though, they were all very clear, and extremely creative, especially the weird squashing noise when SBC walks and the waka waka sounds.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I had a hard time hearing what SBC said at the end, so if you could tell me it would be grand.

keicho responds:

"I wonder, why is he looking me like that?"

[Random Clockday Short]

Hah

^^Good Points^^
A neat little short for clock day. i really liked the drawings because of how original they were. The script was funny, like "Your blender seems to have bested me" is a funny line. The storyline was rather funny, and the ending was just great.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like you kind of said already, the guys voice at the end is incredibly annoying.

johnfn responds:

Thanks. I'm glad my humor hit home with someone.

The voice acting was practically unavoidable since I had to go like an hour BEFORE I submited (ie, I had no spare time to make it good at all)

[Dailytoon #241]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked how I am able to skip the long annoying intro, hooray for that. I thought that saigon's part was the best...so true. i liked the music and sound effects in each part too, especially the Captain Jack song, even though it sucks.

^^Needs Improving^^
Rummonkey's part was already submitted once by him, or atleast I think him in a separate submission. And when you hit the menu button from that game, I got the angry faic dude and the piclownjews frozen on the menu.