FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[J-ass SkateBoarding NEW]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was good, as just about every previous reviewer has already pointed out.

^^Needs Improving^^
Somehow this just isn't as entertaining as the real show. You didn't animate very well and your animations were only large scale and were very slow. Physics weren't good because of the slow animations and your skateboards just hovered over the ground. There were no sound effects, and I really think sound effects are imperitive in a movie such as this.

[Striped #1]

K

^^Good Points^^
A very good collection of FBF work from two artists! I have to say that both authors did a very nice job on their own part. Each part was synced well with the music, which was a treat as well! Everything was animated smoothly and there was a lot going on in both parts. I have to say I liked galactic cores part better though.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmmm...I always like to see a menu button during each scene, just in case, but it wasn't a problem since both parts were pretty entertaining.

Review Request Club.

[Shit Skater]

K

^^Good Points^^
At least it was short and to the point.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is really bad, and there is a lot you can improve on. For one, you really overused gradients, and the gradients you used were crude, unoriginal, and just hurt the graphics in this. Your animation consists of animation only on a large scale with no detailed animation. The sound effects are annoying, and I really can't say that I believe much effort was put into making this.

[Response to Joe Cartoon's]

K

^^Good Points^^
I've never seen the original, so I'm not sure exactly what this is about, but the storyline in this is pretty humorous. I thought the picture that flew out of the guy was pretty funny looking.

^^Needs Improving^^
This doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. I didn't find it too entertaining and it really lacked an interesting storyline to it.

[FBF 1 Season 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
Animations were very smooth. There was lots of variety in the types of FBF effects you used, which made this interesting. The shape morphing type things you did were cool as well. I liked the music too.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't really think of much that sets this apart from the many other FBF animations on NG. You should try to refine your skills and add some more stuff going on at one time in order for this stuff to be more popular.

[Microsoft 2000]

K

^^Good Points^^
I understand the joke. It's kind of outdated though, since Microsoft hasn't used the commercial you are parodying in years, but still mildly funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a pretty lax effort. You could have definitely added some more to this to follow the old commercials a lot more. This was nothing but text, and you could have atleast added some voice overs or something to give this more of a realistic effect.

[Aisling]

K

^^Good Points^^
I have no idea how this has such a low score. I thought this was much better than most things with double the score. The randomness was hilarious. My favorite part was when the cow fell in the river, pure funny! The sound effects were cool, and the animations weren't too bad either. Very creative and definitely worth watching.

^^Needs Improving^^
That bird screeching in the beginning was really annoying and sounded very poor. Also, some of the animations could use some more details in them.

[Draggin' my car around]

K

^^Good Points^^
Weird Al has to be one of my favorite music artists, so when I saw "Draggin' my car around" in the portal, I hoped it was a music video, and I was pleasantly surprised that it was. I was also surprised how well made it was! the animations were all very relevant to the lyrics in the song. I thought the graphical style in the drawings was very unique, and the way you made it look to be on a piece of paper is just really cool! A very good movie, every weird al fan should watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animation style is good, but it gets a little sloppy in some parts!

WAR-HEART responds:

^^Good Points^^
THEY SHOULD
^^Needs Improving^^
YES IT WAS

[Thug Life #1]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really nothing much. I guess it could be a lot better if you improved the stuff below.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I could probably go on and on with what is wrong with this movie. First off, the music is really annoying. I really hate rap music and the whole ghetto scene portrayed in this movie is a little odd. The storyline is really stupid and the graphics don't help to make it any more interesting. Your animations contain mass movement via FBF action, not even tweening a lot of the time. You didn't animate anything detailed like walking. This ends in a terrible place, though I'm glad it ended sooner than later.

[Daily2oon SE: HENTAI SIM]

K

^^Good Points^^
It's unfortunate that most people probably don't read the description to a movie before they watched it, because that is what really made this humorous. He had to dance the night away...of course! And the funky music just topped it off.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, like X said, this could use some more effort put into it. Perhaps a new scene or two, and definitely atleast some more animation in it.