FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deaths....]

K

^^Good Points^^
I'll give you a point for humor because of the text at the end. A little humorous. Also, the music at the end is fitting.

^^Needs Improving^^
One can always tell a beginner's movie by the sound effects, and this is obviously one from a beginner because of the overused Flashkit sound effects. You should make your own or use something that's not so cliche. The animations were very slow and not smooth at all. This just doesn't cut it by today's standards.

[2. big]

K

^^Good Points^^
I actually found the introduction to this funny. Bob Saget was kind of unexpected, and the epic music is always good. The speech scene wasn't bad either, kind of humorous.

^^Needs Improving^^
After the introduction, this movie went completely down hill. I didn't expect it to be good at all, but there really wasn't much animation at all, save for tweens consisting of only a few frames, and hardly any FBF animation. The storyline wasn't that great either. I found it rather boring.

[Bill Clinton On Cops]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound clip was pretty funny. I've heard it before and it has made me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could really use a lot of reworking. The graphics are obviously very bad. You hardly manipulated your pictures at all, and when you did, things just turned out worse than if you hadn't. The scenes you drew had minimal detail and this doesn't show a whole lot of skill with working in Flash. The sound quality wasn't that good either.

[Chaos Trick-Or-Treating]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were well done. Nice use of scenery and sprite. You changed the camera around a lot, which is always good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like the last guy said, this is really boring. Besides that, the voice overs are more annoying than anything, you should have used your normal voice.

VitorAraujo responds:

I didn't know those voices annoyed people too much, I wanted to sound like a baby.

[Mandy's Reptars Revenge]

K

^^Good Points^^
Mainly the graphics were the best part. The drawings were pretty good; looked like their designated characters, and the animations weren't that shabby either.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effects were more annoying than anything. I don't really understand the whole Rugrats fad here on NG, and I didn't find this very funny at all.

[Lord Of The Rings:Short]

K

^^Good Points^^
The artwork is very good, as many reviewers have already told you. The drawings have a ton of shading and a unique ring to them. Good coloring as well. The music goes good with a LotR themed movie too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this is terribly unifinished. Nothing really at all happens, and the bulk of this lasts for about fifteen seconds. You should really complete the movie. Also, work on your animations, they aren't too smooth.

[PukaPuka]

K

^^Good Points^^
I found the sound effect you used for him talking to be pretty humorous, and also the laughing sound effects was neat.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a lot of improving. For one, the preloader doesn't really work, it just says to wait until it finishes loading. The movie itself makes little sense. All we know is this guy has come to kill us all. not the best end to a movie in my opinion. Also, the animations make little or no sense.