FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos Trick-Or-Treating]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were well done. Nice use of scenery and sprite. You changed the camera around a lot, which is always good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like the last guy said, this is really boring. Besides that, the voice overs are more annoying than anything, you should have used your normal voice.

VitorAraujo responds:

I didn't know those voices annoyed people too much, I wanted to sound like a baby.

[Mandy's Reptars Revenge]

K

^^Good Points^^
Mainly the graphics were the best part. The drawings were pretty good; looked like their designated characters, and the animations weren't that shabby either.

^^Needs Improving^^
The sound effects were more annoying than anything. I don't really understand the whole Rugrats fad here on NG, and I didn't find this very funny at all.

[Lord Of The Rings:Short]

K

^^Good Points^^
The artwork is very good, as many reviewers have already told you. The drawings have a ton of shading and a unique ring to them. Good coloring as well. The music goes good with a LotR themed movie too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, this is terribly unifinished. Nothing really at all happens, and the bulk of this lasts for about fifteen seconds. You should really complete the movie. Also, work on your animations, they aren't too smooth.

[PukaPuka]

K

^^Good Points^^
I found the sound effect you used for him talking to be pretty humorous, and also the laughing sound effects was neat.

^^Needs Improving^^
This could use a lot of improving. For one, the preloader doesn't really work, it just says to wait until it finishes loading. The movie itself makes little sense. All we know is this guy has come to kill us all. not the best end to a movie in my opinion. Also, the animations make little or no sense.

[How to make buttons]

K

^^Good Points^^
Most of the information is accurate. This would be a decent guide for someone with absolutely no flash knowledge.

^^Needs Improving^^
A button tutorial. There are really many tutorials that cover buttons, along with many other subjects, so I really don't see a point in this tutorial. The instructions aren't great, but what really set this apart as bad, is that you don't even cover the "down" and "hit" aspects of the button! Those are equally as important as the other ones, and you just left them out. Before you make a tutorial, learn the ropes of Flash.

[Valentinez Day Special]

K

^^Good Points^^
Really I'm at a loss for here. Usually I can think of something, but really this is just bad.

^^Needs Improving^^
I've never been a fan of shape tweens, but seriously, you used a shape tween to tween the guy into himself. Does that really make any sense at all? It's a waste of time. There is no music, which really gives this a dead feeling. The storyline also just ends in the middle of nowhere. What were you thinking when you decided to end the movie there?

[Bills bday]

K

^^Good Points^^
A tad bit humorous. The sound quality was pretty good too, most things were easy to hear.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, NG is for Flash work, not home movies transfered into flash. Since you compressed this a lot to conform to NG's regulations, you lost a lot of video quality. The storyline moves way too slow in the beginning, I was bored to tears!