FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bills bday]

K

^^Good Points^^
A tad bit humorous. The sound quality was pretty good too, most things were easy to hear.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, NG is for Flash work, not home movies transfered into flash. Since you compressed this a lot to conform to NG's regulations, you lost a lot of video quality. The storyline moves way too slow in the beginning, I was bored to tears!

[RobotZ true storie]

K

^^Good Points^^
The music was a cool tune.

^^Needs Improving^^
Immediately, there is no preloader, and the instructions on how to play aren't very clear, and many who aren't familiar with SWF's on NG might not understand how to play the movie. Second, the storyline wasn't very exciting at all. These hyper bats come and some poorly drawn robot needs to destroy them. Not exactly what I would call an epic.

[the matrix]

K

^^Good Points^^
A movie of this low quality brings back memories for me, but for actual good points of the movie itself, this has none.

^^Needs Improving^^
The movie starts out with the most cliched sound on all of Flashkit, that crappy, low quality gunshot. That needs to go. Then the graphics consist of nothing but the shape tool and sparingly the paintbrush tool, then animated about as terribly as possible, along with the very believable explosion at the end. Why would you want to kill Neo anyway?

[Glock's Chocolate Factory]

K

^^Good Points^^
It surprised me how much this entertains me. The graphics were well done in this. You had good drawings in this movie; good shading and details. The dancing was hilarious to me too. I especially liked Ketchup glock's dancing, it's just hilarious! I also like how the music is not just one song, but many from the movie. I could listen to it forever!

^^Needs Improving^^
This would be good if they went inside, but the festivities outside seem just as fun!

[FrogBag3000!!!11!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, this is a mildly funny movie. I'll say that the "what can a frogbag hold?" scene is kind of funny, probably the best in the movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
For one, everything moves way too fast. I had trouble reading a lot of the things you wrote in this movie. Also, the picture quality was very low and there really wasn't any animation in this movie. I, for one, didn't find this that entertaining.

[?]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a great show of you real graphical talent. The graphics are nothing short of great in this! The drawings, first off, had lots of detail with textures and shading, and the lighting was just so life like!

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's just a loop in which not much really happens other than this clock eating some dinner. The music quality is also obviously quite low.

[Strawberry's Testimony 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I kind of found the last line "if you are a boy between 4 and 9..." to be pretty funny. The way you drew SBC was pretty unique...I've never seen him with eyes.

^^Needs Improving^^
That Microsoft Sam voice just doesn't fit. You really should have taken the time to get Speakonia and use that in order to make the voices. I think it would have had a much more positive effect on people had you done that. Also, the "Welche's Juice Girl" text doesn't make much sense.