FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Toon With No Name!]

K

^^Good Points^^
For personal reasons I found the "Damn them all!" scenes pretty funny, not that they really are funny other than for my personal reasons.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie is really quite lacking. The text has really bad grammar, which I'm usually don't care about, but it really makes things hard to understand. Because of this, I really had no idea what was going on and this just turned me off from the whole movie. You messed up from the beginning, so no bother commenting on the other problems!

[Kenny Rogers' Jackass]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound clip sounds pretty funny. Not sure what it is fun, but it seems pretty funny, and the quality was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty terrible. The animations were tweens and other simple movements, and the drawings were mostly stick figures with either single colored fills, or just plain crappy looking gradients. Also, a lot of the time the animations didn't seem to follow the sound clip as well as it could have.

[BoaF: Character Turns]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is an interesting submission. It is not often that someone makes a movie that only has general background for the characters. Your drawings are pretty nice, and I like the way you presented this, both graphically and the music.

^^Needs improving^^
Really not much in here. Would be better if you had included a few more characters to this, and also perhaps some kind of introduction to the upcoming movie. Even a menu would be better in this.

[DumbassDude Short ep 12]

K

^^Good Points^^
One good thing is that these movies seem to be getting better in nearly every aspect as you release more. You revamped the graphics, which looks great, and the animations are much smoother, and the drawings have more detail. This was I found particularly funny; I really didn't expect that ending to occur!

^^Needs Improving^^
I can see little voids in the black outlines of some things, I assume where you made lines for shading. You may want to consider cleaning that up a bit in the next episode.

DumbassDude responds:

thanks and yeah i noticed that to, ill clean up.

[8 clock!?]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were actually pretty good in this movie. You used some shading and put some detail into what you drew, and some good effects were used. The storyline was pretty funny, I enjoyed watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really didn't like the sound effects at all. When there wasn't anything playing, there was a really blank feel to this. You should add some music in or something to help with the awkward silence.

HoboPorn responds:

ah yeah I felt thatw ay to but wasn't sure thanks, i'll try to put somthing to fill the blank when I can.

[Steady as She Goes! Pilot]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is a good start to a series, and I can see it going pretty far and getting popular. I really liked the characters you had; they were quite different, yet both were acted very well. There was lots of humor throughout this, and it was a good length, especially for the low filesize...atleast SOME people know how to compress audio well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Every good series needs its own fancy preloader, so get to work on that.

Leet-Productions responds:

Yeah, the preloader, I was about to make one, I always add preloader last, but I wanted to submit, so I rushed it. If I didn't compress the audio, the filesize would have been like 5 megs! :P

[Monty Pythons Galaxy Song]

K

^^Good Points^^
A decent attempt at making a movie. I thought thing after the first scene with the two stick figures was pretty well made. Decent animations, and drawings, weren't great, but still pretty good.

^^Needs Improving^^
Didn't like the first scene at all. There was hardly any animation in that part of the movie and it wwas really a boring intro to a movie that luckily, turned out ok.