FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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^^Good Points^^
This is a great show of you real graphical talent. The graphics are nothing short of great in this! The drawings, first off, had lots of detail with textures and shading, and the lighting was just so life like!

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, it's just a loop in which not much really happens other than this clock eating some dinner. The music quality is also obviously quite low.

[Strawberry's Testimony 2]

K

^^Good Points^^
I kind of found the last line "if you are a boy between 4 and 9..." to be pretty funny. The way you drew SBC was pretty unique...I've never seen him with eyes.

^^Needs Improving^^
That Microsoft Sam voice just doesn't fit. You really should have taken the time to get Speakonia and use that in order to make the voices. I think it would have had a much more positive effect on people had you done that. Also, the "Welche's Juice Girl" text doesn't make much sense.

[The Toon With No Name!]

K

^^Good Points^^
For personal reasons I found the "Damn them all!" scenes pretty funny, not that they really are funny other than for my personal reasons.

^^Needs Improving^^
This movie is really quite lacking. The text has really bad grammar, which I'm usually don't care about, but it really makes things hard to understand. Because of this, I really had no idea what was going on and this just turned me off from the whole movie. You messed up from the beginning, so no bother commenting on the other problems!

[Kenny Rogers' Jackass]

K

^^Good Points^^
The sound clip sounds pretty funny. Not sure what it is fun, but it seems pretty funny, and the quality was good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics were pretty terrible. The animations were tweens and other simple movements, and the drawings were mostly stick figures with either single colored fills, or just plain crappy looking gradients. Also, a lot of the time the animations didn't seem to follow the sound clip as well as it could have.

[BoaF: Character Turns]

K

^^Good Points^^
This is an interesting submission. It is not often that someone makes a movie that only has general background for the characters. Your drawings are pretty nice, and I like the way you presented this, both graphically and the music.

^^Needs improving^^
Really not much in here. Would be better if you had included a few more characters to this, and also perhaps some kind of introduction to the upcoming movie. Even a menu would be better in this.

[DumbassDude Short ep 12]

K

^^Good Points^^
One good thing is that these movies seem to be getting better in nearly every aspect as you release more. You revamped the graphics, which looks great, and the animations are much smoother, and the drawings have more detail. This was I found particularly funny; I really didn't expect that ending to occur!

^^Needs Improving^^
I can see little voids in the black outlines of some things, I assume where you made lines for shading. You may want to consider cleaning that up a bit in the next episode.

DumbassDude responds:

thanks and yeah i noticed that to, ill clean up.

[8 clock!?]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were actually pretty good in this movie. You used some shading and put some detail into what you drew, and some good effects were used. The storyline was pretty funny, I enjoyed watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
I really didn't like the sound effects at all. When there wasn't anything playing, there was a really blank feel to this. You should add some music in or something to help with the awkward silence.

HoboPorn responds:

ah yeah I felt thatw ay to but wasn't sure thanks, i'll try to put somthing to fill the blank when I can.