FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sherlock Holmes Christmas]

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^^Good Points^^
I've never really been a big fan of the Sherlock Holmes series, but I think this Christmas special may just change that. The jokes were pretty good. Mostly sexual, but I don't mind. You did a good job there. The beginning was great, the ending was great, and everything in between was pretty swell too.

^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I don't like is the coloring. Everything seems so dark to me. You think you could have had Holmes walking through the forest in the daytime or something?

[PicoDay: PathwayThroughNG]

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^^Good Points^^
It is very similar to the Madness movie you made about NG, which is a pretty good thing. You did a good job of imitating the movies you are showcasing and doing a good job with your graphics. I think it's pretty cool to watch this and just see if I recognize all of the movies in this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like your Madness movie though, this is really long once again, and the length doesn't really have much to show. A lot of it is pretty boring.

[Madness: PathwayThroughNG]

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^^Good Points^^
It was an interesting take on the Madness series. You did a seamless job of adding your character into the many different movies and using the sound from those movies well with yours. An interesting storyline and a nice graphical show to go along with it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Unfortunately, the 9.6mb filesize doesn't seem to be an overstatement. This movie just seemed to go on and on. I was really bored while watching it. Definitely could have been slimmed down a bit.

swiftstylerX responds:

I think it should either be slimmed down, or just some parts remade to be more entertaining. I'll admit there are a lot of parts that are just plain boring.

Thanks for reviewing though!

[Mario Short#1]

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^^Good Points^^
Well I was surprised by this, mainly because I think the score it has now is quite harsh for the quality. The animations were very smooth and were well done. You had a good amount of camera effects, which made this look more professional.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really get the ending at all. A surprise from Luigi? Care to explain exactly what is going on here.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 008]

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^^Good Points^^
Here is Hitler and Wartortle enjoying their time at the beach. A fitting scene for the two of them. I guess the music fit, since Wartortle is trying to look about as badass as he can, even though he is a turtle with a fluffy tail. Whatever.

^^Needs Improving^^
The tail on Hitler doesn't look quite right to me. Shouldn't be so white and it could use some outlines or something to make it stand out more.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 007]

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^^Good Points^^
Lol, this episode is amazing. I've watched many, but this has to be one of my favorites. I never imagined you would put Hitler into a turtle shell. And you did a pretty convincing job of it nonetheless. I laughed when that first popped up. Great job on this one!

^^Needs Improving^^
Norah Jones? Couldn't you find some better song that was water related? This one is terrible!

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

My toes just touched the WATER.