(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
It had its moments throughout where I got a little smile. Scenes like the 50 cent one was funny, and the rape scene as well. The graphics were quite nice, especially the FBF animation you added to this.
^^Needs Improving^^
Like Bezman said, it's just didn't seem to fit together quite right. I didn't find quite a few parts to this entertaining; probably not even half, in fact.