FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Go Speed Go!]

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^^Good Points^^
It wasn't a bad music video at all. You've got pretty good editing skills and everything was synced up and went nicely with the music and lyrics. Liked the Monty Python reference too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Looks like you just compiled a few videos in order for this. Doesn't really look like it was done in Flash. You should definitely try drawing and animating in Flash for your next music video.

[Bahamut]

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^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing really to improve, but I would say that I didn't notice any difference in the new 60 FPS. I'd stick with whatever is normal with you.

^^Good Points^^
Well that was really random. The upside down-ness of this kind of made my eyes hurt! The movie had some good humor in it, more than most of the movies you've made. Thought Afro_Stud was played a pretty funny role here.

kinggila responds:

With 60FPS, the characters move better since there's more frames during the tweens (lol, I'm so lazy). I'll be sticking to 60FPS. :)

[skiing]

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^^Good Points^^
An ok start. You at least had a little animation to go with the little guy, so his body wasn't completely stable while he was moving along.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really get a skiing feel from this. The graphics really don't show that at all. The background is boring gray, and the landscape is simply lines. Could use some more details in this to give it a scene.

[Greentown is in trouble]

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^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie you made. The graphics were impressive. Nice shading and very nice FBF animations. Like the beginning, when the guy jumped in the air. Definitely some animating skill here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a great storyline. Didn't really develop much. I would definitely like to see much more work from you, but it needs to have a bit more of a storyline to it.

Lorkas responds:

Hi! Thanks, that means alot to me.

Hmmm...In my opinion the Jumping scene was the best, but I was dissapointed about the last one (where he's reading) because it didn't turn out too well.

Anyway, I'll be improving my Snake movie and resubmitting it (probably), so stay tuned!

[clock day (written)]

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It's a typical clock day movie. Very short and not much went into it. Could have used some music, or some more creative music. however, I'm still giving you a ten for this, since you are a cool dude.

Lorkas responds:

Thanks lol!

When I was making this movie, I had a fresh flash 8 download...and didn't know what it does. I broke the rule "Don't submit your first movies".

[You Are A Pirate Clock]

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^^Good Points^^
Awesome pirateclock tribute. You incorporated a lot of good things into this...Lazytown, Dodgeball, and an awesome sailing song which I've never heard before. Graphics were very good too. Great job!

^^Needs Improving^^
Too short in my opinion. Could have been a lot cooler if it were a bit longer.

MetalDart responds:

RESPOND IN WORK

[FFF:Airwings ~ Chapter 11]

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^^Good Points^^
As I started watching this movie I was quite bored, but after a while, it redeemed itself quite nicely. The graphics were very sharp throughout, especially backgrounds and such. Awesome job on the storyline too, it was very interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very slow beginning. The first two or three minutes really nothing at all happens, just scenes of the desert and such.

[Megaman/Daft Punk]

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^^Good Points^^
Very cool movie! I was expecting it to just be a regular old music video with some audio syncing to the animations, but I was really delighted when I found that this movie not only did that very well, but was about making Megaman harder, better, faster, and stronger. Quite creative, I love it!

^^Needs Improving^^
I have to admit that it got a little repetitive and boring towards the end. Could have used something fresh at that point.

[Another Bahamut?!]

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^^Good Points^^
Not a bad way to go about introducing a new character into the mix of these episodes. The arguing between Afro_Stud and the three bahamuts was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
It sounds a little weird to me that they all have the exact same voice overs. I would have changed each one up a little bit.

kinggila responds:

Yeah, I was a bit concerned about the voices at the end. It sounded too echoey, but meh.

[A Free Dr. Pepper Bottle!]

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^^Good Points^^
Actually something that was kind of entertaining. I thought that Bahamut's reaction to finding a doctor pepper bottle in the machine was pretty funny. Definitely some better acting in this one than some other movies. Interesting ending, too. Makes me want to watch the next movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
I know it will never change, but the walking looks extremely odd, and grahams voice was better when you used to do it yourself.

kinggila responds:

Yeah, I'll have to make a flash continuing this story. I was only going to end it there, but people like to see more, so they shall get more...Sometime. :P