FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[skiing]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
An ok start. You at least had a little animation to go with the little guy, so his body wasn't completely stable while he was moving along.

^^Needs Improving^^
I didn't really get a skiing feel from this. The graphics really don't show that at all. The background is boring gray, and the landscape is simply lines. Could use some more details in this to give it a scene.

[Greentown is in trouble]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie you made. The graphics were impressive. Nice shading and very nice FBF animations. Like the beginning, when the guy jumped in the air. Definitely some animating skill here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a great storyline. Didn't really develop much. I would definitely like to see much more work from you, but it needs to have a bit more of a storyline to it.

Lorkas responds:

Hi! Thanks, that means alot to me.

Hmmm...In my opinion the Jumping scene was the best, but I was dissapointed about the last one (where he's reading) because it didn't turn out too well.

Anyway, I'll be improving my Snake movie and resubmitting it (probably), so stay tuned!

[clock day (written)]

(title in work)

It's a typical clock day movie. Very short and not much went into it. Could have used some music, or some more creative music. however, I'm still giving you a ten for this, since you are a cool dude.

Lorkas responds:

Thanks lol!

When I was making this movie, I had a fresh flash 8 download...and didn't know what it does. I broke the rule "Don't submit your first movies".

[You Are A Pirate Clock]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Awesome pirateclock tribute. You incorporated a lot of good things into this...Lazytown, Dodgeball, and an awesome sailing song which I've never heard before. Graphics were very good too. Great job!

^^Needs Improving^^
Too short in my opinion. Could have been a lot cooler if it were a bit longer.

MetalDart responds:

RESPOND IN WORK

[FFF:Airwings ~ Chapter 11]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
As I started watching this movie I was quite bored, but after a while, it redeemed itself quite nicely. The graphics were very sharp throughout, especially backgrounds and such. Awesome job on the storyline too, it was very interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
Very slow beginning. The first two or three minutes really nothing at all happens, just scenes of the desert and such.