FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DailyToon10302004]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in Four's part, just because it is Korn. I guess Zero's is the best part, even though it is just a bunch of random FBF animations.

^^Needs Improving^^
Really quite disappointing. The content was really lacking. Seven's was just annoying and went on for way too long.

[night under karaoke]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
The character drawings were really quite good. They definitely made the movie what it is. You captured the slightly insane face of the first guy, and the face of the second guy was just bizarre looking and really went well with the screaming lyrics.

^^Needs Improving^^
Was a little bit short. Could have used some more people in here singing different songs.

[Don't feel bad]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Graphically this looked pretty nice. The style of the drawings and animations were pretty professional looking, and looked nice. Music was kind of cool too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Can't really complain to you, as the length really isn't your fault. I guess your skills are probably better displayed in some of your other movies.

[I Am A Tree]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Another good STWPT song on NG. The song was actually pretty catchy, and I think you did a good job of capturing the different moods throughout the song. Graphics were pretty good, nice details and shading.

^^Needs Improving^^
The filesize was great, but it seems like you compromised the quality of the audio. Seemed a little grainy to me.

[Anemone]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Another random song, and I thought this one was pretty cool. Some of the graphical things you did here were pretty interesting, like all of the images of Anemone's and the "trying to spell it" scene were pretty cool.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics could use some work. Like at the end where you had the rocket ship taking off, that didn't look so good.

[Armadillo Potato Love]

(title in work)

Well, it's pretty hard to judge this one, since the song you were given, is really short. That's probably the only reason you have less than a 3.0 on this. But I guess with what you were give, a song only 20 seconds long, and little to be done with the lyrics, I think you did about all you could do. Created an interesting character to sing, and animated everything about as best as you could.

[summer blockbuster!]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
I think it is better than the other Glass Toaster movie that I saw. This one had some better visual effects and better scenes to it, like when he was looking at himself in the attic or standing on the top of the hill. Definitely some interesting images in this one. Also, the way you made this look like an actual movie preview was cool, and "Coming to VHS" made me smile.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics looked a little iffy in some spots, almost as if the quality had been turned down for a second.

[Lyrics To A Song]

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^^Good Points^^
I think the best thing about this movie was definitely the facial expressions why the guy was screaming, especially his eyes. They looked really crazy and it made the movie pretty entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't think the eye thing works for the whole song though. I definitely think you should have done something different maybe half way through the song. Put him in some different scene or something.