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[Tendril]

(title in work)

This was an enjoyable FBF animation, definitely better than a lot of people on NG can do. One thing I liked about this was that there was always multiple things going on in this instead of just one central animation, which seems boring to me. The background was pretty cool as well. However, I don't think the 7.7 meg filesize is justified at all. You probably need to compress the music a bit.

Review Request Club

[Duck.flB]

(title in work)

Heh, I had to say I was kind of entertained by this. The song was really weird and fun to listen to. Glad to see that people used a lot of duck.fla in their Clock Day 2008 submissions. I think you could have done a better job in the design of Game&Clock though, he was pretty crudely done.

[Madness Assasination: KT]

(title in work)

Definitely better than your average Madness short. I really liked the music, I feel that it fit the mood of a presidential assassination quite well. Good animation and use of simple tricks to add nice effects, such as the flags blowing in the wind. In the future, you'll probably be better off making movies a bit longer with some more development in them. This is a bit short.

C-Doodlez-Man responds:

Well, that seems to be the main problem, so i'm glad the animation itself was good, and i could definetly develope a better animation.

[DC Cement Bumper (Redone)]

(title in work)

Well this was not that entertaining. It was very short, though the drawings and animations weren't bad. Try making something more original next time instead of just a remake of something. Or at least remake something a bit longer.

[Don't Mess with Kid]

(title in work)

Certainly an interesting storyline to this one. I liked the use of the McDonalds theme on this one. Doesn't look like you set the right dimensional properties when you submitted this though since there is a bunch of white space around the movie. You could just edit this though.

[microbotniks 10]

(title in work)

Another unexpected ending to this. I couldn't help laughing when I saw what the dead robots were being made into. Why not more robots? Anyway, I really enjoyed the series, hopefully we'll see some more from you in the future.

[microbotniks 9]

(title in work)

Who knew robots could expel such bodily waste? A pretty unexpected episode overall. I think this is the first episode in which a robot hasn't died, which is interesting. Can't say this is one of my favorites, but still good nonetheless.

[Helpin' Palin]

(title in work)

It was a bit short, though I understand your restraints on this one. I didn't really like the tracing of Sarah Palin. I thought you could have drawn her or something. You seemed to do a good job of drawing the first guy, so why trace her? Also, add a preloader and maybe a replay button at the end.

[TF2 Gun Sounds!]

(title in work)

Very good...Well thought out and a great use of the gun sound effects for recurring beats in the song. The visual with the song is great, since you can easily tell what weapon is making which sound, because otherwise it would be pretty hard to tell sometimes. Only thing I thought was missing was some voices from the game. I think you could have fit one or two into the song.