FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gear of Metal]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good metal gear parody. I think I will suggest it for the Metal Gear collection. The voice overs were very well done, and the humor was great too. The best part had to be the quadrapalegic guard. Nice job on the animations as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are a little too plain for me. You didn't put much detail into the backgrounds and such, which was disappointing. Also, try to stand a little further from you mic, since there was clearly some noise in there resulting from that.

Leet-Productions responds:

I love quadrapledgic guards;. :D

Thanks lots.

[Enforcing the law]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah, the law in clocktopia is so strange, but I absolutely love it! It was pretty funny how bobby clock just kept shooting everyone immediately after they "broke" the law.

^^Needs Improving^^
The screamer at the end was completely useless, though I'll admit it definitely served its purpose, I had no idea it was coming. You could have ended this in a civil manner that was much more interesting than this.

ShitlordCentral responds:

Well thank you sir. It's hard work enforcing the law, my law, of Clocktopia upon the people, and sometimes extreme measures need to be taken to make sure a point is made.

I admit the end was lazy, but then again, so was the movie. By the end, I really didn't have the energy to add an extra 10 or so seconds for a more 'proper' ending.

Thanks for the review =)

[Blockhead: Episode 8]

K

^^Good Points^^
A great addition to the series. It was quite interesting how this took a musical twist...I sure wasn't expecting that to happen. The graphics in this episode are significantly better than those in previous episodes, but the humor is still always there. This was a great movie, I don't know why I didn't watch it sooner.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think the musical stuff was a little hard to hear. I couldn't make out some of the stuff that Blockhead was saying during this. Also, I think it took away from his stupidity, which is about the best things about this movie.

[Mario VS Sword Kirby]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was definitely pretty well done. I really like how you made this look just like SSB, and you did a good job at this. The shields and attacks were even just like the game. The fighting was pretty well thought out. I really liked how the camera was always moving too. Did you use v-cam to do that?

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the ending should have been a little better. You didn't do anything like the game with the ending which was disappointing.

[Break in and your fired 7]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked your voice overs. You ranged them well and they were quite clear. There was a bunch of humor in this, like the flashback to six flags. The drawings were also pretty good, especially your characters and some of the plane crash part.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting this to be a little funnier. Random seems to be the new thing nowadays, so maybe think of that for you next episode. Also, I wasn't very wowed by the backgrounds.

Review Request Club.

[The Car And Stapler]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was one of the better stopmotion movies I've seen submitted lately. You showed some skill in this, like having the stapler fly through the air. Also, you had a lot of good camera angles, and every animation was smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
At one point towards the end there seems to be a pile of books or papers that suddenly appears on the couch. Little stuff like this always need to be improved. Also, there really wasn't a great storyline in this. The ending was kind of lame.

[Naruto Party IV]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a great movie, I definitely think you should consider submitting the previous three episodes. You have a good animating skill, especially with facial expression. The sound clips were all good choices from funny movies. Very funny. I enjoyed watching this.

^^Needs Improving^^
You many want to consider drawing some backgrounds in some of your movies. If not just to add a little more to your score.

[runescape -=free world pk]

K

^^Good Points^^
The drawings were very good. I like how you made the border to the movie look similar to the runescape interface. Also, the background drawings were good, and the stick animations were great. I also liked the music, very bassy!

^^Needs Improving^^
This was very short and not very entertaining because of that. It would have been better if the fight was going pretty evenly then a group of people came up and crashed it or something. This fight was just lacking.