FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A very DOCKY Halloween]

K

^^Good Points^^
There were some good images in this episode. I like how you drew SBC and some of the other clocks, as well as HLG.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really hard to understand. In fact, I'm sure I only got the bare minimum in order to understand what was going on. I couldn't hear half of the speakonia, and there was too much going on at one time. Also, music with lyrics don't work, it's just distracting. Then towards the end that stupid screaming noise just kept playing over and over. I couldn't wait for this to be over.

IZSBHR responds:

it was quality sound or animation, or not on time.

I chose to do better animation instead of sound :)

[AbyssWars]

K

^^Good Points^^
Very well done. The sound effects had to be the best part since they were very exaggerated and very dramatic. They added a lot to this movie. The song wasn't bad either, SOAD has to be one of the best bands. The graphics were great of course too. The drawings were unique, I liked your characters and the animations were very realistic. I liked the camera angles too, they were always changing.

^^Needs Improving^^
Perhaps some kind of backstory would make this a lot better.

[Robotech Sentinels Part 1]

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were very good in this movie. It was a unique style since you didn't really do anything in Flash, but just imported images in, but it was a very clean job. The animations were keen, and the sound effects were top notch and very unique. This has a very unique storyline too, and I enjoyed watching it.

^^Needs Improving^^
While the graphics were good, I would rather have everything done in Flash...it's kind of cheating what you did. The only other complaint I have is the subtitles. They go by way too fast and I had trouble reading a few of them. That's something you may want to improve upon.

[Gear of Metal]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a good metal gear parody. I think I will suggest it for the Metal Gear collection. The voice overs were very well done, and the humor was great too. The best part had to be the quadrapalegic guard. Nice job on the animations as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
The drawings are a little too plain for me. You didn't put much detail into the backgrounds and such, which was disappointing. Also, try to stand a little further from you mic, since there was clearly some noise in there resulting from that.

Leet-Productions responds:

I love quadrapledgic guards;. :D

Thanks lots.

[Enforcing the law]

K

^^Good Points^^
Hah, the law in clocktopia is so strange, but I absolutely love it! It was pretty funny how bobby clock just kept shooting everyone immediately after they "broke" the law.

^^Needs Improving^^
The screamer at the end was completely useless, though I'll admit it definitely served its purpose, I had no idea it was coming. You could have ended this in a civil manner that was much more interesting than this.

ShitlordCentral responds:

Well thank you sir. It's hard work enforcing the law, my law, of Clocktopia upon the people, and sometimes extreme measures need to be taken to make sure a point is made.

I admit the end was lazy, but then again, so was the movie. By the end, I really didn't have the energy to add an extra 10 or so seconds for a more 'proper' ending.

Thanks for the review =)

[Blockhead: Episode 8]

K

^^Good Points^^
A great addition to the series. It was quite interesting how this took a musical twist...I sure wasn't expecting that to happen. The graphics in this episode are significantly better than those in previous episodes, but the humor is still always there. This was a great movie, I don't know why I didn't watch it sooner.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think the musical stuff was a little hard to hear. I couldn't make out some of the stuff that Blockhead was saying during this. Also, I think it took away from his stupidity, which is about the best things about this movie.

[Mario VS Sword Kirby]

K

^^Good Points^^
This movie was definitely pretty well done. I really like how you made this look just like SSB, and you did a good job at this. The shields and attacks were even just like the game. The fighting was pretty well thought out. I really liked how the camera was always moving too. Did you use v-cam to do that?

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, the ending should have been a little better. You didn't do anything like the game with the ending which was disappointing.

[Break in and your fired 7]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked your voice overs. You ranged them well and they were quite clear. There was a bunch of humor in this, like the flashback to six flags. The drawings were also pretty good, especially your characters and some of the plane crash part.

^^Needs Improving^^
I was expecting this to be a little funnier. Random seems to be the new thing nowadays, so maybe think of that for you next episode. Also, I wasn't very wowed by the backgrounds.

Review Request Club.

[The Car And Stapler]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was one of the better stopmotion movies I've seen submitted lately. You showed some skill in this, like having the stapler fly through the air. Also, you had a lot of good camera angles, and every animation was smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
At one point towards the end there seems to be a pile of books or papers that suddenly appears on the couch. Little stuff like this always need to be improved. Also, there really wasn't a great storyline in this. The ending was kind of lame.