FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[runescape -=free world pk]

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^^Good Points^^
The drawings were very good. I like how you made the border to the movie look similar to the runescape interface. Also, the background drawings were good, and the stick animations were great. I also liked the music, very bassy!

^^Needs Improving^^
This was very short and not very entertaining because of that. It would have been better if the fight was going pretty evenly then a group of people came up and crashed it or something. This fight was just lacking.

[-Finding Emo-]

K

^^Good Points^^
Well, the graphics were the best part about this movie. You drew everything pretty well, and the bloody parts were done well enough and had good enough sound effects to make me cringe a little bit while watching.

^^Needs Improving^^
I doubt this will make it into the funny cartoons section, unfortunately. This really wasn't that funny in my books. It's really short and the sound quality was that good, which was just annoying.

[Potter: A Wizards Tale]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was actually pretty funny. I was expecting something actually really involved, but this was just a couple of simple stick figures running around. The text at the top made me laugh and the animations were just funny looking. The music had nothing to do with anything, which was great! Good trees too!

^^Needs Improving^^
I think it was a little disappointing that you didn't add more to this. Even if you made it really short it would have been cool to see a full movie with graphics like this.

[Xeno's Phoenix Wrong 4]

K

^^Good Points^^
You used a lot of different sprites in this, which is always good. These seems to use a lot of the same stuff over and over, so it's nice to see something new. The sound clips were good quality too. My favorite had to be the Austin Powers clip, solely because that is an awesome movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Syncing was a little off, as you've already said, just looks unprofessional. A lot of the clips I didn't really find that funny. You should take some more time to make these and find some funnier clips. Not as funny as your other episodes.

[The Life Of a DDR Player.]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty funny movie. I play ITG all the time, but I've never experience stuff quite like this...too bad. I enjoyed all of the randomness in this, the ninja scene was quite humorous. The animations and drawings were surprisingly good too.

^^Needs Improving^^
You really need to make the voice overs louder. The volume seemed to change throughout this too, which was quite annoying. This was hard to hear in spots, which wasn't too good.

[My Love...]

K

^^Good Points^^
The preloader game was neat, but since the movie isn't very long to load it isn't really necessary at all. The movie itself...I liked the animations, they were very subtle and looked realistic. The music fit, of course.

^^Needs Improving^^
What is with the graphics? they look like a video imported into Flash or something. You didn't really do much in this movie either. You just animated the guy getting on his knees then asking her to be his girlfriend. Not really interesting if you ask me.

[Thirsty Plants]

K

^^Good Points^^
Heh, this movie was pretty darn funny. It was great how the dude just kept saying "What would Jesus do?" to get his way. It was pretty funny how you made that pattern. The voice overs were excellent, as illustrated in the first scene. Good job on making this movie and on getting it into a collection so fast.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations are pretty shoddy. Best illustrated in the scene in the woods, where everyone walks by simply jumping up and down. Some of the drawings weren't great either. The main guy's arms were far too long.

JonahTSucksFatBalls responds:

Yeah, I'm not much of an artist, and believe me, I know how long that guys arms were. I thought it was kind of funny, but at a certain point, things like that are sometimes not seen as funny, only as a mistake.