FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Whine & Cheese]

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^^Good Points^^
An ok spoof of a talk show. I'll admit, the whining that came from that guy was a bit annoying, and this Flash was pretty good quality and showed that whining quite well. Overall, looks like you spent some time on making this humorous and presenting it well.

^^Needs Improving^^
It was a bit overdone if you ask me. The whole thing went on too long, and the whole thing was basically about him being a whiner. I got it after the first minute.

[Eddy's Got A Vengeance]

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^^Good Points^^
I guess it was mildly entertaining. I thought some of the voice acting was pretty funny, and some of the things that were said made me laugh. Interesting ending as well, liked the little story about Eddy's punishment.

^^Needs Improving^^
Just a bunch of images, with not too much done in Flash in terms of drawing and animated. Some of the pictures looked really weird and were hard to tell what they were.

[Don't Download Music]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, that was the most random thing I've seen today. I was sitting here thinking "Why the hell is the mentos song playing?" And then at the end, it actually has a guy with mentos, which is completely unrelated but made me laugh.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing really done with Flash here. It's basically just a video, which was pretty disappointing. Maybe you could try and animate this with drawings instead.

[- NEW DECK -]

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^^Good Points^^
I like how you added a little humor into this by adding a little storyline. Most skate movies just have a bunch of tricks and nothing else. Even with this, the tricks were very well animated and I could tell exactly what was going on. The body was realistically animated with the tricks as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There was quite a bit to read in this one. I would suggest having the viewer control the speed of the text, it would be more user friendly.

[Mustang]

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^^Good Points^^
I think that you are quite an asset to your band if you can make music videos like this. The music was pretty cool, and the graphics were awesome. I like how you animated to go with the intensity of the song. More intense music, shaking, intense animations. Very nice coloring, really like the red shades to everything.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hmm...A very good movie overall. I wish you had made some more music videos :(

[Jackass eXtreme]

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^^Good Points^^
Ok, you had the scene select which I liked, and adding a back button to this was a good idea, as it made the scene select more functional in my opinion.

^^Needs Improving^^
It's basically just a bunch of people exploding and such. Not really in the spirit of Jackass, which is doing weird stuff, getting hurt, for the enjoyment of the viewer. This was just some chaotic things going on here.

[OlgaPataki:ThousandMiles]

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^^Good Points^^
Not a fan of the original song...the remixes are great though. Anyway, to be completely honest, it was still a high quality submission with a lot of good qualities. The syncing was right on most of the time, and very relevant to the lyrics. Good animations too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Meh, can't really say that I was too interested in this. Maybe it was the music, but I try not to let that hurt the score.

[sonic movie madness 3.2]

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^^Good Points^^
Quite enjoyable. I have to say that the graphics were very nice. There was great layering in the backgrounds, and the backgrounds were animated to simulate realistic camera movement. Most importantly though, the storyline was interesting and humorous as well. Nice job.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought that specifically Sonic's voice over was a little low quality. Sounds like a pretty bad microphone or something.

[The Adventures Of Boik]

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^^Good Points^
The graphics were pretty good. Overall pretty nice animations, and smooth too. I kind of liked the random language you made up, it was a unique feature to this movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Well, I can't say that I was really entertained by this. Nothing in it was really too humorous, and the storyline wasn't really developed all that well, other than he goes and gets lost in the sewers, which wasn't really interesting.

[Resident: Enix]

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^^Good Points^^
A rather funny movie. You have a good voice for making Flash movies, and I think you did a decent job voice acting in this. I thought the humor was pretty funny, and I got a few laughs out of this. An enjoyable movie overall.

^^Needs Improving^^
I thought maybe you could have used more sprite objects and backgrounds, just to keep things consistent in the graphics. If not, you should use some shading to make the backgrounds more interesting looking.