FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Italian Assignment]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Interesting. I think the graphics were pretty fair. It's a good thing you put subtitles in too, cause I don't know a word of Italian. This got interesting once Mario and Yoshi showed up, that was kind of neat.

^^Needs Improving^^
The audio could definitely use some tweaking. The young kid's voice was really loud compared to all the others, which seemed to vary throughout the movie. Just annoying having to adjust speakers all the time.

[Sajatus/Curse]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I thought the graphics were kind of neat. The sketchy style is kind of unique. Music was cool as well. Definitely like how you lead into that.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess you could use some backgrounds or something besides simply the characters that are focused on. Also, some more animation would be nice. This was mostly just the same picture zoomed in on and tweened.

[Blue thing!?]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Interesting concept here...everything done in shades of blue, which really makes a neat effect graphically. I thought that the music went well with all the blue, since it was a calm song. Interesting characters too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Maybe you could have done something more in the backgrounds besides just solid blue. Also, that one huge shape tween was just ugly.

[The Last Battle]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Slightly better than "Fury of the Lost Soul". The humor wasn't so much just childish scat, and some things that were just random and kind of humorous to watch.

^^Needs Improving^^
Like your other movies, really poor graphics. Try doing some more backgrounds and taking some more time to draw the pictures instead of getting them from google or whatever. Really could use a lot of work on the graphics.

[Fury of a Lost Soul]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, I did fine a few parts of this mildly funny. The first one with the refrigerator kind of made me laugh, and the cat one was also somewhat redeeming.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, the movie does not match the description at all, which at least sounds interesting. The graphics were very crude. White backgrounds, jpeg images, and lame coloring are prominent throughout this whole thing, which really degrades the score. Most of the humor was childish and boring as well.

[Ricky D Episode 02]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
What a random story. Goes from why is Rob living there, to the Quaker Oats guy saving them all from the mafia. Weird, but still lots of humor and entertainment throughout. Very clean graphics, and overall a great series. Can't believe it isn't more popular.

^^Needs Improving^^
Rob's voice still sounds a bit weird to me during some parts of the movie. Other than that, pretty clean.

[Ricky D Episode 03]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
A great third episode if you ask me. I liked the way you portrayed the grandma as senile, and then having her being some Satanic necromancer was quite a surprise to me. I found this to be quite random and funny. Lots of good jokes throughout and some action in this too!

^^Needs Improving^^
What was with Rob's voice in Grandma's necromancy basement? He sounded like he was practicing to sing in the opera or something.

[Jedi Duels]

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Hehe, cool movie here. There were some funny jokes, my favorite being the brothers' 50th birthday, when they were still children. Some pretty witty jokes here. I liked the graphical style, especially the large eyes. They were really good for displaying the mood of each character at different times.

^^Needs Improving^^
For the score it has, I would expect much better graphics. These aren't very impressive in terms of shading and realistic animations.

[Dedicated to my brother]

(title in work)

Ok, I understand that you are sad, but to be brutally honest, this was not a very good Flash animation, though most tributes are lacking. Some fade in text, followed by a bunch of fade in images, coupled with a sad song. Really nothing too impressive in here. Most of the time, the pictures were so small and low quality, that I couldn't even tell what was going on.

Again, no offense, but nothing very great here.