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[Ricky D Episode 01]

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^^Good Points^^
This was a pretty awesome start to a new series. This was obviously very carefully made. The graphics were very clean throughout and you had a lot of nice graphical effects to make this look really good. Funny jokes throughout as well, definitely looks like a winning series to me.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sometimes the voice overs sounded just a little bit forced, but they were alright overall.

[Megaman commands mission1]

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^^Good Points^^
Very funny megaman movie you have here. The humor is an interesting style, that I'm sure some find a little boring, but I thought it was quite enjoyable and had a nice charm to it. Funny jokes throughout, I enjoyed it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The filesize is really large. A bit too large if you ask me. Could definitely do some optimizing and such to make this more of a friendly view.

[Megaman commands mission2]

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^^Good Points^^
Heh, this was pretty great if you ask me. I loved the characters. Opening this movie with "R" was a good idea. I think you did great voice acting there to make him sound like a pretty funny character. Megaman's discussion with Redkips was also pretty funny. Great job on the graphics too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Sounds like your microphone isn't that great. "R's" voice was really low quality and wasn't very clear at times. Other than that, great movie.

[super mario dumbshine]

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^^Good Points^^
Never played SMS, but this was still pretty enjoyable, even if I don't know what was going on. Graphically this was quite pleasing. Everything was very colorful and looks like it was taken care of very carefully. Lots of humor throughout this, like in the courtroom. Nice movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
It looked good, but what you could do just to make the graphics even better is have some background things moving. For example, when the lawyer was the focus in the courtroom, nothing else was really moving.

[Enormous Penis]

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^^Good Points^^
Haha, hilarious song. Somehow I've never heard it before, and it was quite unexpected. The point at which he first mentions enormous penis, this movie really gets interesting. You used a lot of creative art after this, of someone enjoying time with their wiener. And adding tricky the clown was a funny idea.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly, I was really bored with this for the first thirty seconds or so. The animation went with the lyrics way too much, and really not much creative was added into this part of the movie.

[Wheel Chair Man Vol 3]

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^^Good Points^^
This was pretty unique and interesting. The graphics don't look like they were done in Flash, but they still looked pretty good and were detailed as well. Storyline was pretty good, kind of interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
The microsoft Sam voice doesn't sound quite right when it is used in this movie. It doesn't do a very good job. Sometimes the sound quality seemed to go a little low, like the heartbeat sound effect sounded pretty bad.

[y my 2nd movie]

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^^Good Points^^
Hehe, a pretty unique music video, of a comedy/opera. Something I haven't seen done in the past. The art wasn't too bad, drawings had some good detail to them. I had a quick laugh during the funny parts of this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Animations was a little weird. There wasn't much going on, besides what was directly related to the lyrics of the song, which is kind of disappointing. Work on the lip syncing as well.

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks for the review

[y my 3rd movie]

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^^Good Points^^
Not too bad of a movie. It had a decent storyline and a decent joke at the end. The art wasn't too bad. Even though it's seven years old, still probably better than I can do.

^^Needs Improving^^
The voices of the aliens...I thought the raspy, almost mechanical sound to them was kind of cool, but the quality was just terrible. Without the subtitles I wouldn't have had much idea what they were saying, and they were just a bit annoying overall.

Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks

["IF"]

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^^Good Points^^
Wow, brilliant. I can't imagine a day when this movie would win only third place. The detail in the graphics was amazing. You clearly have a lot of talent in drawing and animating. I will definitely check out some of your other stuff. I really liked the music. It set an appropriate mood for the animations, which were really quite moving. A very powerful submission. Awesome work.

^^Needs Improving^^
Nothing to really improve, but what was with the 3D image at the end? Was that from something and you just made a prologue to it?

Andrew-Buckley responds:

Third is still pretty good =D, as for my drawing skills I have to work on them a still which I am. The 3D image was my attempt at a bit of drawing in Photoshop so it wasnt done using a 3D program, I drew it on purpose for that shot. It was supposed to symbolise a memory, one she wouldnt forget =), like a snap shot. Thanks for the comments.