FattyWhale's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[CC: The Last Tree.]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music. Good tune there. This was a strange movie, but it was kind of funny, and interesting how you added in some game components in it.

^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics are just terrible. You used lots of ugly gradients and the drawings were very unprofessional. There was no storyline and the randomness was just a bit too much. This hardly had anything to do with clocks either.

[Halo Gameboard 2K6™]

K

^^Good Points^^
Ok, I actually found the gameboard itself to be humorous in the way you made it. The way you get screwed over any time you land on a red square and basically go back to start is funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
Why this wasn't flagged since it was blammed multiple times is beyond me, but anyway, this was blammed for a reason before, because it is a pretty stupid submission. The graphics are terrible, and the voice overs are annoying and hard to hear.

[A ClockDay in the life...]

K

^^Good Points^^
I liked the music in this. It helped magnify how boring clockclock's life is, and the end was funny with that great funny quote.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off, clocks don't have legs, fool. Second, there has already been a clock clock and so far he is beating you big time in terms of good quality movies.

[Happy Clockday 2K6]

K

^^Good Points^^
Umm...nice and short I guess.

^^Needs Improving^^
You will almost never hear me say I like loops, but watching this shows me how practical they really are. This is just really short and only a few frames, so it would have been better looped...wow thought I would never say that line.

djmarky responds:

Well thanks for your reveiw.
It would have been better looped and thanks for critesism.
But as i have said before i only done that because it was clock day, etc.
But i am working on a new series now which will be better so look out for me in the flash portal :D

[ConverseLock's First]

K

^^Good Points^^
Looks like it could have a decent storyline. Hard to tell what is going on though.

^^Needs Improving^^
There is no sound, so all we are treated to is your half assed animations. From the looks of it though, as I said, this looks like it could have a half decent storyline if only there were some sounds in this.

[CD 06- HappyClockDay OMG!]

K

^^Good Points^^
Yes, happy clock day an all that.

^^Needs Improving^^
Coming from a clock that hasn't been in any movies or anything, this doesn't serve much of a purpose. The movie is boring, it's one frame with a crappy movie clip that moves up and down. Nothing very good in this movie.

[Ode to ye B]

K

^^Good Points^^
This was a funny sound clip you used for this. Not sure where it came from, but it was pretty random and funny too.

^^Needs Improving^^
Ok, you could have atleast tried to make even a crappy movie with crappy animations, but this is just six SBC's rotating around with nothing else happens. Next time try to atleast put some effort into this to make an actual movie.